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Your Dish

December 13th 2007 05:42
Don't worry about your dish.
I asked you to wash it,
but I knew you wouldn't -
you never do.

I cannot wait until you move-out
it will be soon,
but not soon enough.

You should worry about your toothbrush,
because I washed that and the dish;
but, I washed them in different ways,
and in different water.

Don't worry about your sweater.
You left it on the bathroom floor.
I washed that, too,
in the hottest water.
I even threw it in the dryer.
Oh wait, was that wool!



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Comment by Anonymous

October 30th 2007 08:39
I love it!

Comment by Harry

October 30th 2007 23:54

Comment by Patricia Graff

November 3rd 2007 05:56
Hi Harry,

Yes, it's about that resentment that builds up when two people live together, but don't get along anymore.

I think everyone's felt it to some extent.


Comment by Patricia Graff

November 3rd 2007 06:08
anon:

Thank you!

Comment by Kleonaptra

November 3rd 2007 09:17

Comment by Patricia Graff

December 5th 2007 04:02
It's a little dark...I'm glad you liked it.



Comment by Tracy

December 13th 2007 10:13
Hi Patricia

I really like the honesty and strength of this poem, I think it's great.

Tracy

Comment by Patricia Graff

December 14th 2007 00:12
Thanks Tracy,

Honesty in my writing is something that is hard for me, so this means a lot.

Patricia

Comment by Tracy

December 14th 2007 06:18
You're welcome

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