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The Voices in my Head - by The Voices in my Head

 
"Yet I find, yet I find repeating in my head...if I can't be my own...I'd feel better dead." Nutshell, Alice in Chains

We.

December 27th 2006 22:58
Lean into me, onto me.

Allow Me to help
ease the burden
of Your mind.

You are here
beside Me
thanks to an unseen hand.

Some divine plan.
Some romantic vision
of imagination's tug.

You are here.
You are with Me
You are We.

Part of Me.

Loved.

You smile at the We
that is
Me.

We kiss.

We touch.

We love.

We Laugh.

Thankful for the imagination
of God.

Grateful to be each other's
Me.

We.

The We that matters,

that cares.

The We that can stare
all night into the landscape
of Our faces.

Pleasure from just
being.

Being who We are,
separate from You and Me,
together always.

We.
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Comment by Manjula

December 27th 2006 23:53
Voices in my head - excellent poem - made me do some introspection on my relationship

Comment by The Voices in my Head

December 27th 2006 23:56
Manjula,
Thank you! Those are some powerful words to a writer, that something I have written has made you feel...it is the greatest compliment that could be given.

Come back,
Voices~

Comment by tinkster

December 28th 2006 04:17
I really like this poem. You are incredible with your words. It took me somewhere, and it
will take others to different places. Very good one voices!

Comment by The Voices in my Head

December 28th 2006 12:49
Tinkster,
Thank you, my friend...again, one of the greatest compliments to give a writer...

"It took me somewhere..."

Thanks for that,
Voices~

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