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Thinking Thoughts - November 2007

We are beasts

November 12th 2007 08:36
We are beasts, civilized;
Tranquilised and romanticized;
Building homes of guilded cages,
Thinking about freedom.

Roads carry freedom's sweat;
In pools it builds; evaporates.
Hail wastes the way; we have mined
And leave our dreams aside.

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Comment by Anonymous

November 13th 2007 05:47
I really appreciate your poem. The imagery is extremely tormented and sad to me. Freedom is something that many of us put aside and I feel that you have captured the essence of how many of us live - giving up our true essence, taming the wildness within ourselves.

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