Read + Write + Report
Home | Start a blog | About Orble | FAQ | Sites | Writers | Advertise | My Orble | Login

From The Heart - by Achilliez_Heel

Unspoiled perfection

February 21st 2008 02:12
I would really appreciate your opinions, its really important
thank you, J


Abbi, you are “unspoiled perfection”
I care not about the perception of the rest of the world, because my vision is clear
And in the eyes of mine, you are beyond compare
Your body, mind and soul
Flawless
Your unlike any girl I’ve ever known
Your skin so silky soft, creamy brown
the center of my tongues attention
With a scent that fills my nostrils and engulfs my senses
Pure ecstasy

Your mind brings passion to the passionless
a treasure chest of your dreams and desires, your hopes and fears

just waiting to be unlocked by the combination of my thoughts and the very words I write to you now
For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.
And it is with every breathe I take I try to return the sentiment

Your eyes
Oh yes especially your eyes
tender pools of hazel and white
Id rather stare into to these portals for only ten minutes than I would gaze upon your unclothed body for hours
And id rather gaze upon your beautiful face than any other

I love you so much, its ridiculous
I love you so much it doesn’t make sense
The amount of love I have for you is more than I could count to
I’m in this state where the thought of loving you less is to abstract to imagine
So i stay up late writing
Cause I want to give u all I got
And I try to think of ways to show
Just the way I feel for you

I’ve recently realized that I need you
I need you like I need to drink, like how I need to eat
Because when I don’t see your beautiful face, I hunger for it
And when I don’t taste your juicy lips, I thirst for them


Sometimes I wish I was rich
Not because I want things
But because I want to give you everything you want
I want to indulge your every craving
No matter what

Poets search for days, weeks even to find inspiration
But I need only to see your face, scratch that, the mere thought of you brings my mind to a state of
Love, happiness, and hope
Hope that as I leave you everyday, it will not be the last time I look upon you
Hope that I have found the one, the one who loves me for me, that I love
And the hope that we will be happy forever


48
Vote


   
Subscribe to this blog 


Just this blog This blog and DailyOrble (recommended)

   

   


Add A Comment

To create a fully formatted comment please click here.


CLICK HERE TO LOGIN | CLICK HERE TO REGISTER

Name or Orble Tag
Home Page (optional)
Comments
Bold Italic Underline Strikethrough Separator Left Center Right Separator Quote Insert Link Insert Email
Notify me of replies
Notify extra people about this comment
Is this a private comment?
List the Email Addresses or Orble Tags of the people you would like to be notified about this comment


One per line max of 30

List the Email Addresses or Orble Tags of the people you would like to be notified about this private comment thread. Only the people in this list will be able to see or reply to your comment.


One per line max of 30

Your Name
(for the email going out to the above list, it can be different to your Orble Tag)
Your Email Address
(optional)
(required for reply notification)
Submit
More Posts
2 Posts
2 Posts
6 Posts
59 Posts dating from April 2007
Email Subscription
Receive e-mail notifications of new posts on this blog:
0

Achilliez_Heel's Blogs

52 Vote(s)
0 Comment(s)
2 Post(s)
366 Vote(s)
2 Comment(s)
11 Post(s)
79 Vote(s)
7 Comment(s)
2 Post(s)
314 Vote(s)
0 Comment(s)
7 Post(s)
21 Vote(s)
1 Comment(s)
1 Post(s)
123 Vote(s)
5 Comment(s)
3 Post(s)
Moderated by Achilliez_Heel
Copyright © 2006 2007 2008 On Topic Media PTY LTD. All Rights Reserved. Design by Vimu.com.
On Topic Media ZPages: Sydney |  Melbourne |  Brisbane |  London |  Birmingham |  Leeds     [ Advertise ] [ Contact Us ] [ Privacy Policy ]