The Voices in my HeadThis American Girl Swallows...
December 7th 2006 23:39
I close my eyes and give a gutteral sigh of pleasure. With my mouth full, my tongue wraps around the flesh in my mouth. The heat of it, the taste, the juices which flow into the back of my throat is a total sensory experience. I wrap my lips around, enthralled. I use my teeth, my lips and my tongue. The moment comes and I am done. I swallow the last of the juices, freeing my mouth from the task at hand. I sit back and wipe my lips with the back of my hand. Afterglow.
That was the best cheeseburger I have ever had.
That was the best cheeseburger I have ever had.
The power of the imagination is a beautiful thing, isn't it?
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Comment by Deorre
Stress Alive
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Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
LOL that is a great comment!
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Comment by Pilgrim
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Comment by David my David
I read the title and thought this Post of yours was going to be an environmentally-friendly post about the effects of global warming on US water supplies, and how AMerican girls are trained to be so environmentally-conscious they will all swallow the local water regardless of the taste ...
Then I read it, only to discover that it is about environmentally-unfriendly burger franchises ... how much you love them, and that you prefer a plastic cheeseburger over a home-made mayonnaise burger ...
I have to say I was very disappointed ... But having read your closing comment about how powerful the imagination is, I will only ever think of you sucking the excess cream-cheese off the end of a gourmet Kranski ...
David ...
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
LOL...that was great!
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Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
I never said anything about loving franchises...I never said I loved cheeseburgers. I only said, I love the power of the imagination...it takes you where your mind seeks to be.
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Comment by David my David
I must have misinterpreted the subtext of your post ...
I only hope I'm not misinterpreting the subtext of your comment ...
Are you saying that Australian cheeseburgers are better than American ones?
I wish I could say sorry sincerely, but I can't ...
Have you ever spilt mayonnaise on your breasts, and had to ask the aid of a chivalrous gentleman in the line-up to remove it in a manner he seems fitting?
David ...
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
No, I have not done that...and even if I were to, I sincerely doubt there would be a lineup of anyone anywhere remotely near me at the time...
As for comparing American to Australian quality of meat...I have no experience on which to make such a comparison.
You definitely misunderstood the purpose of my post...I am surprised a bit by that...
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Comment by Hellvis
Earache Hotel
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
Do not be a naughty boy. Well, of course you are going to be a naughty boy...Carry on then.
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Comment by Mrs M
Mum's Word
But as you cleverly put it, it was my imagination that painted a different picture. Tricky.
Love & stuff
Mrs M
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
LOL, you know, a lot of people are reading this but not very many are commenting. I find that humorous. The point of this story is a bit deeper than it appears on the surface. Perhaps some do not want it to go deeper?
Thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your comment and the honesty of it...
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Comment by KylieW
Celebrity Obsession
I love it! I thought for a moment you were going to take the less-classy 'hot dog' route, but am glad to see that you surprised me with the cheeseburger!
You're such an evocative writer.
KylieW
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
I always love your reactions and comments. I am glad that you know my writing well enough to know that I would not write about oral sex in such a manner! I am glad you were surprised by the ending but not for the same reason other people are...that's a great compliment you gave, although I realize it was unintentional. lol
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Comment by albea
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The Voices in my Head
LOL at least you were honest! You can't even imagine the grief I have taken on this post...lol I think people are just pissed that it wasn't what they hoped it would be...
Oh well, not the first time I have pissed people off, it certainly won't be the last...
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Comment by Moonbeam
Well thank u ever so much, as I will never be able to eat a cheeseburger again w/o thinking of the correlation in your story, to what was assumed to be the obvious. So, in essence, I too am a swallower, & we'll just leave well enough alone @ this point.
The mind can indeed be a cesspool.......
Swallowing,
Moonbeam
Comment by The Voices in my Head
The Voices in my Head
Well, sorry to take you there with those visuals about your innocent, wholesome niece...*wink*
lol
Voices~