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The Firinn, Part 1

April 26th 2011 00:35
Dear reader, The Creatures of Ellieu Forest presents the first part of this venture. I knew that this project would take a long time, and would be long. I just didn't know when I began how long. So, instead of having a part 8, I'm going to start the second chapter of this longer piece, which introduce the Firinn (prounounced FIR inn). Enjoy

Sunlight streamed into the room as Ab’Cainl woke up. The musky images from the night before came into full light, and what once was shaded in darkness now glistened. The golden writing that wrapped around the room sparkled with an incandescent glow, and it surrounded so much more than what he saw. It scrawled around the windows, which in the small room were four of them, the doorway, on the floor around the bed, across the ceiling. They were all over. He felt better today than the night before, and as he turned over in the soft bed, he noticed that his hands and feet were no longer bound. Jumping up, he exited the bed, and stood in the middle of the room. Whatever the scroll work was, it wasn’t a holding spell. Then, something didn’t feel quite right. The hairs on his arms rose, the hair on the back of his neck started to stand on end, and then he looked down. He wasn’t wearing anything. As he rushed back to the bed to try and cover up, but there were no covers on the bed. Whoever put him here certainly knew how to hold a prisoner. Or, did they? He knew that he could make it home. Even if he was in the forest. Or, perhaps he was on the edge of the forest. Then, he noticed the dresser in the corner of the room. Maybe there were clothes in there. He walked across the writing on the floor in his bare feet, and as he walked across it, the writing glowed with each step.

“What is this place,” he said out loud, hoping that the voice that was in his head would talk to him again. Nothing. He continued to cross the floor, growing more and more fearful with each step. What if this was the trap? What if they did think of everything and after so many steps, he would slowly start to bleed to death? Or, he would have a curse put upon him, and he wouldn’t be able to reach his final destination? This was nonsense, he realized. If he had thought about all the what if’s, he wouldn’t have arrived at the forest the morning that they were ordered to go in. So, without a second thought, he made it to the dresser, and took out simple clothes. It had been such a long time since he had worn a simple jerkin, leggings, and shoes. They were the clothes of a peasant, a farmer, a layperson. For someone who was a career leader in the military, all he knew was the uniform.

Slipping the clothes on, he noticed how soft the texture was. Once, he had the opportunity to touch the Emperor’s heavy robes, and even these were soften than they were.

“Hurry up,” a voice came in behind him. He spun around, and saw a beautiful woman standing behind him. “We don’t have all day. The sun has been up for several hours, and I would like to introduce you to the rest of the village before it is midday meal.” She threw him a pair of boots, not his own, that had linings of some sort in them. Without thinking, he put the boots on, and walked outside.

As bright it was in the room, the tree canopy blocked the sun outside. Around the outside of the small room, a staircase descended a little ways down, and on the ground, 27 people stood, all stairing at him. On first glance, they all looked the same with fair skin, round eyes, and light hair. Their clothes matched with his. Even the women wore pants. Their ages were for the most part undeterminable, as they all looked middle age, except for a small group in the front, that looked like small children. Each had a different expression on their face, some proud, some scared, some memorized, as if they had never seen a dark-skinned man before. He felt most awkward as he looked at the children, and they seemed to see right through him. Searching the crowd for the woman who brought him the boots, he spotted her, standing in the front, to the right of the children. He wondered why he hadn’t seen her before.

“Human,” she began with a loud voice. “Why does your kind want to destroy my kind?” He felt drawn down to the people, but at the accusation, decided to stand right where he was. Some of the men in the back of the crowd refused to make eye contact, and they were one’s who carried what looked like weapons at their sides. The women looked rather judgmental.

He stood there, not sure how to answer the question. It was true, that his kind wanted to clear the forest. They knew that already. Did they want to know why he specifically wanted to destroy their kind, or why their Emperor King want to tear down the forest.

“I don’t know,” he responded to them. Not one of their faces changed. They still held the same gaze as before. Had it not been for the natural swaying that the body does, he might have thought that they were statues. “I am only a soldier,” he went on, trying to explain to them what his role was.

“We know what you are. We weren’t sure what your role was. We hoped for a commander of sorts. Are you that commander?”

They knew. They knew what he was. No matter what he told them, he knew that they already knew everything, so all his training on what to do in a hostage situation fell mute in his mind. Then, he remembered his mother, a long time ago, telling him of a race that existed longer than any man had lived.
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He couldn't see anything beyond a bright glare that penetrated through his closed eyes, and dare not open his eyelids, yet. Perhaps, if he moved where ever he was, he might be able to turn over to block out the light. Then, he thought that if he were to turn over, he might fall of where ever he was, so that option was out the window also. So, he waited for the bright light to go away. And, he waited and waited. With nothing to judge the time by, he knew that he waited for about an hour, maybe more, maybe less. He also couldn't hear anything. It crossed his mind that maybe this was his afterlife, and that perhaps the brightness was all in his mind. So, mustering up the courage, he lifted his heavy eyelids.

Everything around him went from amazingly, head piercing bright to a single candle that flickered beside his bed on a stand. He lifted his head to dizzying height, and fell down on the bed again. He never liked feeling helpless, especially when he didn't know who was around, or where he was. How could he get to this place anyway? It felt as if he hadn't moved for a long time, and his muscles were still asleep. Still, he was an officer in the Emperor's army, and a little stiffness never stopped him from doing anything. He had to assess the situation. Fighting from what held him down, he fought to get up, and then felt what he struggled with. His arms were tied to the side of where he lay, and when he pulled on one side, the other side disappeared under the bed. It was only a simple knot, so his training wouldn’t have been a problem. He twisted his hands around, and reached out for the knot just in time to discover that his hands were covered by bags, and sewn to the rope around his wrists. He chuckled at the efficiency, even if it seemed a little overboard. He looked down at his feet, and they were also tied, both with the same rope. So, he flopped his head back down, and waited. Whoever they were, they knew how to incapacitate their prisoner.

Where he was, from what he could see, wasn't a regular cell. The candle light bounced off the dark walls, and illuminated gold scrolling around the top of the ceiling. He had heard about spells written to protect the building, but never seen anything like this. The scroll danced around in ribbon like fashion, with dashes, dots and accents over the different parts of the scroll work. He followed it around the room. Maybe it wasn't a spell. Maybe it was just decorative from a world long gone from sight. Against the far wall, a door with a window in it stood shut, and beside it an ornate dresser, also with dark wood over the top of it. Then, back around, a small table with a wash basin, and fancy scroll work on the legs of the table, then finally the nightstand where the candle rest, shedding it's light upon the small room. He wondered what would happen, if he blew out the candle. Would someone come? Would anyone truly care about him? Or, was he destined a slow death here in this strange room? No, he decided. Had they wanted him to die, he would have died already. So, he waited. He couldn’t hear anything. No clocks ticking, no crickets chirping, no natural sounds to let him know what time it was. So, taking his life in his hands, he blew out the candle.

The dark room got much darker, then his eyes adjusted to the darkness and he could see the moon outside his window. Waning moon. He hadn't been there that long, he figured, as the night before he left, it was the same moon. Or, the other option was that he had been here an entire month. Whatever the case, the candle sparked and lit up again. He turned his head to the other side, away from the bright light of the candle, and closed his eyes. The light was too much.

"Serves you right, man, for trying to eliminate the light from this room." He searched for the origin of the voice. It was the same voice that spoke to him in the forest.

"Where are you? What's going on? How did I get here?"

"All in due time, man. For now, you must sleep."

"Wait, I have so much to ask you. Please, let me know one thing." And he felt his body go against what he wanted to do. It slowly started to go to sleep. "Please, how long have I..." and before he could finish the sentence, his body fell asleep. Not like the sleep before, he could still hear, and judge his surroundings.

"You have been here for two days. Why do you wish to know this?" the voice echoed in his mind. He scrambled to not let it get closer to what he was thinking, but the being dug fast and deep, and he couldn’t stop it.

And, the voice found it. It found him reading the note. It found him looking at the woman in the pub. It felt the feelings that he had for her. It sensed the danger that was immediate to the woman, and the want for the man to stop that danger. It seemed to like what it found, and let the rest of it alone. It backed away, and let him rest from the intrusion. He thought 'Thank you' but couldn't say anything to it. All he could do was lay there and hope that he would get back to her in time, before the evilness that took over the kingdom would reach into her woods. But, a new sense of hope built up in his being, and he slept peacefully for the rest of the night.
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A sly grin crossed over Dabba’s mouth as one by one, the men ran from the forest, screaming madly, but not their Commander. After a long while, it seemed that the last man in the forest staggered out of it, and fell down on the ground. Dabba, certain of this good news, rushed forward to the fallen solder.

“Where is your commander?” He cried out.

“The blackness took him. It came out of nowhere, an inky, mass that came from the tree’s. We couldn’t see anything, and a voice echoed to kill everything. I didn’t know what to do. It was a command… but not from the commander. It was an absence that took away our sight. I tried to grab him, I truly did, but when I thought I had his shoulder, for he was only in front of me, the blackness receded into the sky, and I had my hand on a barren tree, with no one in sight. And, the voices, oh, god the voices! I’ll never forget all of them, swimming around in my head. Get them out! GET THEM OUT!!!” He jumped up and ran, just like the rest of the men.

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Child, remember what I told you? How you shouldn’t believe everything that you hear? Well, Dabba did believe, and for the rest of the day, even though he lost the battle once again, he walked around with a vicious smile on his face, muttering to himself.

“Blackness from the tree’s, huh? I’ll show this blackness from the tree’s what real blackness can do…” And he walked down the street, once again into the bowels of the city, and kept going. He walked past the beggars on the street, past the mutts and rats, past all of them, into an even dirtier part of town. This part of town was so dirty that not even the cockroaches that freely roamed the streets came here. Death was inevitable, and it lined the streets in filth and refuse. Down the road, he came upon a door for a shop labeled “The Witch’s Cauldron.” And mused at the broken bell in the doorway.

“Mugu Mayya, are you here? Your bell is broken.”

“I know,” a voice out of the darkness of the shop echoed. “What do you need, Daba?”

For being such an evil witch, she accommodated his wants. “I want you to take the evil out of the forest. The Emperor King would kill me if I do not clear away a forest that is steeped in magic. He does not understand, as I understand, that magic can only fight magic.”

“You dare come to me, Dabba, and ask me to take out the magic of Ellieu Forest?”

“How did you know…”

“I know a lot more than what you think I know. Your mind has already told on you. And, as for clearing out the magic that surrounds Ellieu Forest, I cannot. That takes the power of one that is greater than I.”

“But, there is none greater than you in the kingdom. You are the greatest witch that ever was, and ever will be. I will throw in a favor for you.”

“Dabba, You are the nicest person who has ever come to me after my grieving time. You have loved me like only my dead mother and father have. So, trust me when I say this: You will fail if you continue on this path of destruction, and the Emperor King will fall behind you. You have already been warned of this outcome. The creatures are amassing, and will attack anyone who comes close to the forest. They care not about rank and number. The beings who protect their forest will never let you overthrow them.”

“How dare you speak to me in such a way! If you won’t do it for me for my sake, then I will force you to do it. Look through your book, find a spell, and use whatever you need to get the blackness out of those trees.”

“The blackness will leave when there is no more sorrow in this world. The blackness will leave when there is no more killing, abusing, treachery, and bloody hands in this kingdom. The blackness will continue to be there, until there is no more need for it.”

Dabba walked into the back of the dark shop, following her shrill voice into her blackness, and as he took coverings off the window, he saw no one. “Come here, wench! I have a lesson to teach you.” But, no one answered. On the table in front of him, he slightly coiled back at the jar of preserved eyeballs, and another jar of human fingers, attached to a snake’s body. “Fine,” he began with his shirt sleeve covering his mouth. “We’ll see how amazing you are when your shop is on fire.

“Now why would you want to light my shop on fire,” A new voice chimed in behind him, whispering in his ear. He spun around to face two green, snake like eyes quivering back at him. He jumped back onto the table, covering his face with both hands, quivering in fear. When he peeked through his arms, there once again was nothing there.

As he headed back to the castle, he continuously looked over his shoulder to check to see if something was there, and even when he made it back to the castle, he ordered the guards to close and lock the gates, and when they questioned him, he snapped back at them to do it without question, so they did. And for the rest of the night, Dabba continued to do research as to what the blackness might have been, and stayed in there for a while.

Now, child, I would love to tell you what happened to our dear Captain Ab'Cainl, but as our time is almost up, I must save that story for another day. Just know that what he once knew to be certain death, and was ready and willing to accept the immanent fate that would befall him, he was not dead. In fact, he was far from it.

And, as for his lover, she had hope in her heart that someday he would come for her. He gave her hope, and for the next week, she worked harder than ever, waiting for his return. Even when she heard the man on the street announcing that the great forest had destroyed all the forces of the kingdom, and more men were needed to fight the evilness, she still held on that perhaps he was just lost himself, and would one day return to her.
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The forest looked as it had looked all the other times he had been there, ominous and foreboding. The rain didn't help it look any more welcoming. His men pressed forward at the command of Dabba, and they marched in. If they couldn't cut down this forest, then it would be their job to dispatch anything or anyone that got in the way of progress. Captain Ab'Cainl led his men, trying not to let the pressure building on his heart force him or anyone out. This wasn't a battle. This march took him into something much deeper. His men behind him seemed to get further and further back as he pressed on. At one point, just before the tree line of the forest, he looked back. They were as scared as he was.

"Men," he yelled at the group. "We are here today not to fight, not to arrest. We are here as our orders dictated to take down this forest, and that is what we are to do. I know that you are scared, but fear blocks out progress and learning. You have nothing to fear, as we have no enemy." From the side, he heard a snicker from the illustrious right hand man. "Think of this: if we do not make it out, then we will be free from the tyranny of the Emperor King, and will be able to live the lives that want to." The snickering stopped, and had he not been closer to the tree line, Dabba would have attacked him. "So, let us press forward and find what sort of menace live in the trees." He didn't believe a phrase of the battle cry, and neither did any of the men from what he could tell


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Down the hall, a gear-worked clock sang the song of the hour. After the third bong, a door slammed open, with a half-dressed man juggling the rest of his clothes.

“But you said you loved me,” he pleaded with an invisible force. “You said that we would ride to ecstasy and back again


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UGH!!!

March 31st 2011 16:39
Hello, there. This is your friendly author letting you know that I haven't forgotten about the story, or writing, or much of anything in general. I've been held up by an amazingly persistant cold that refuses to go away. I've been taking pills, laying in agony with one stuffy nostril that likes to shift from one side to the other, and all in all, taking it easy. Although, I do want to tell you more about Cecilia, the captain, the not so good advisor, and the horrible emperor... Maybe later, because I know that I don't write as well when I'm sick. I swear that all the mucus zaps my brain cells.

Today, I'll have some free time, this afternoon at a doctor's office visit... taking my Grandma, not for me... so I'll probably write the next section then. Till then, happy reading.
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As the Emperor’s guards walked away from the empty shop door, an overwhelming sense of grief engulfed them. They knew the magic that seemed to infuse itself in the air. They felt it before, when the ancient trees of the forest loomed over them. Captain Ab’Cainl wondered why they even needed to mess with the forest. It existed without harming anyone, so why worry? Once again, the woman they were ordered to capture hurt no one, so why bother? He looked at the impoverished lining the street. They were the needs in this kingdom. Yet, he had to obey all the orders that came down the line, and rarely questioned them. It was a shame to see the poor needing, and not able to do anything about it.

He turned his back on them, and addressed his primary concern, his men. “Well, there’s nothing here. You are dismissed for the rest of the day. Tomorrow morning, at the cocks crow, we report to Dabba and march to Ellieu Forest. Dismissed.” They all showed hesitation at the mention of the forest, and hoped that tomorrow wouldn’t be their turn to go in. He turned his back and walked away, not wanting to show the fear he felt. The situation called for some diversion, so he found his way to Sanda, a bar in this section of the city. He wondered if any of his men would follow him here. None of them did


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"Ah, I remember now."

A great pause ensued, mainly to regain the composure that he had lost due to the incompetence of his slave


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So, my family's on my back about writing something longer, and after putting it off again and again, I have decided to publish it to the website, as I finish each section. I truly hope that you enjoy this story, as it has been several years in the making.

What do you know about the creatures that live in Ellieu Forest? Do you know the scary stories about an absence of light that flies around at night, devouring those that it doesn't like? Do you know about the Firinn that used to live there, that made the forest their home? Do you know about the king that banished them from their own lands? Do you know about the tales of fairies and pixies that used to live there, but were forced out by the wickedness that lives there now? If you traveled along a road late at night, would you think about taking the shortcut through the forest, braving the shadows masking the unknown, struggling against the sharpness of fear that sent a shiver up your back? Child, do not believe everything you hear, for if we all believed what we heard, we would believe that the world was still flat, that there was life on other worlds, and that someone constantly looked at you, over your shoulder, watched you, knew all that you did


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The Fight

March 23rd 2011 19:34
I have been writing a lot, lately, but the project that I'm working on now is taking a lot more research than originally thought. So, I'll post something else up here to kind of fill in the gap, and hopefully the next one will the current story that I'm working on.

Angels and Demons by George Grie
You're in a courtyard. Flowers of every genius and species surrounds you in their aromatic brilliance. Never before have you seen such a beautiful spectacle. Following the path, you twist and turn crossing between silver pools of water, perfect to the touch. I must be in paradise, you hear yourself say, echoing in the stillness of the courtyard


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