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Swept from the Sea (fiction/romance) - by Kiwi Author

Swept from the Sea continued

February 24th 2007 09:09
As soon as they got going, Falte, started his antics, speeding up, jumping fallen trees and generally just being ever so slightly naughty, but Sarah loved the thrill of speed and the wind upon her face.
She glanced round half expecting Hallion to be some way behind her but Saxon was thundering along at a cracking pace, huge clods of earth being thrown up by his hooves behind him.
Hallion had a wide grin upon his face as they drew level.
‘Let’s go Falte’ Sarah told him, geeing him to go faster.
The landscape just became a blur as they both galloped at a tremendous pace. Crouched down, both them intently focusing ahead, their eyes starting to water from the speed.


She risked a fleeting sideways glance, he was right next to her, starting to pull ahead, when see realised where they were heading to and a look of fear crossed her face, for they were both heading towards the river.
‘Damm’ she cursed before saying ‘C’mon Falte, whoa!’ As she tried to calm him down.
Hallion carried on going thinking she had given up, when he heard her urgent cry of warning, he glanced round quickly, thinking she was in trouble before realising that the danger was in front of him.

He knew there was no way he could stop in time, so quickly deciding which was the most narrowest part, he urged Saxon onwards.
Sarah was slowing down, when in fear she said to herself ‘What is he doing?’ Her hand going to her mouth in suspense.
‘Go Saxon, go!’ He urged desperately as the river bank loomed right in front of them.
And with that, both horse and rider launched into the air, Sarah almost wanted to shut her eyes at what she might see but she was amazed to see them both land safely upon the other side.

As she made her way across, Hallion dismounted, giving Saxon a very well deserved pat on the neck.

Sarah was relieved to see them both safe but she could see that he was a little pale. Dismounting quickly, she went up to him and placed her arms around him, holding tightly.
‘I thought I had lost you’ she told him, her voice still slightly shaky.

Well this is all I have developed so far on this story so guess I need to start writing some more.

Hal
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