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Lifes little slices - by charliesgirl_992000

"Stormy Clouds of Gray!"

June 9th 2007 00:26
Can i dance amongst your stormy clouds of gray?
will you please tell me whispers in my ear with your perfect wind, i need to play.

can we stop time, i have to stay awhile
The skies have become dark and i have lost my smile

After we're done can i bottle up your stormy skies, to bring out another day.
your what fixes me and makes me feel okay.

i'll bring you out when i feel i can do nothing right.
when everything in my head feels darker then night.

If only i could go up to the sky, run, spin and cry.
i need to feel your strong winds kiss my skin.


can your clouds hold me while i sleep
carressing my pain away.

Laying amonsgt your clouds in peaceful slumber,
Maybe you'll let me stay long enough to touch the stars and see their umber

After that, can we play hide and seek with mars

Next we'll walk barefoot on the moon,
all along i'll sadly know it's time to come home soon.

If only i could live amongst the sky,
swaying softly to her sweet lulliby.
PA Stormy Skies
Todays PA stormy skies!" storms are HUGE for me. Mother nature must have known i needed one and i am soo greatful. i'm feeling my childs pain from afar. please keep her in your prayers. Tammy ps, i've only written about three poems inmy "LIFE" so some of this is OK, somes aweful. but it's the best it's gonna get. <smiles>
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Comment by Tracy

June 9th 2007 01:04
Tammy, I love this, especially this bit:

After we're done can i bottle up your stormy skies, to bring out another day.
your what fixes me and makes me feel okay.

i'll bring you out when i feel i can do nothing right.
when everything in my head feels darker then night.


Beautiful...

Tracy

Comment by katyzzz

June 9th 2007 01:52
Tracy beat me, Tammy.

I thought it was just sensational, warts and all, and there really were not too many of those.

It was sheer joy and sheer pleasure and a sharing of pain.

The sky came down to greet you then lifted you into its downy greys.

All too beautiful for words.

Tammy, return to this poem one day, fix just a few little things, you'll know what to do and you'll find you have a poem for everyone which shall be everlasting.

You turned and showed us another side.

Love, katyzzz

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

June 9th 2007 07:21
"Thanks Tracy!!" you know, one of the things you picked out was one of the spots i was sure was aweful. <smiles> the part where, makes me feel okay.

i know if i spent more time, it would be alot better. i'll spend hours deco pauging, but with poems, the longer i work on them, probably the worse they'd get. <grins>
Take care and Thanks!!! Tammy

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

June 9th 2007 07:26
Katyzzz, "...You turned and showed us another side..."
Thanks for such kind words!!! i felt sooo sick today for most of the day. knowing i needed to get up and stop wolowing, but i just sat and felt the pain and sadness. Then the storm came and i was up and outside just like taht. i LOVE the way it feels, looks, and smells. it heals me and i needed healing.
i had gotten my space messeges realy late last night from both my daugher and my neice. neither where together, but both feeling very sad and alone. it just broke my heart, post after post and i couldn't help. it was 3:00 am by time i saw them. They had written them hours earlier. i feel peoples hurt and pain sooo deeply taht i get sick from it. after getting some wonderful wind, and seeing those roaring clouds. i feel sooo much better. writing it out, taking pics. Thats good for my soul.
Thank You!! Tammy


Comment by Ash

June 10th 2007 03:32
This is so beautiful Tammy

I hope you write more poetry and share it with us... I love it all. The photo is perfect for it too... so much power in those clouds.

Beautiful Tammy. Thanks for sharing it and looking forward to much more. What wonderful eyes you see the world through.

ash

Comment by charliesgirl_992000

June 10th 2007 22:32
Ash, Thanks your too kind!!" which is a wonderful gift and what draws me to you.
i have another poem i wrote before this one about my mom and my childhood. i have to work on it some and take some out because it is REALY long. it's kind of raw,so i havent shared it yet. <smiles>
probably pretty soon!
Tammy

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