Julie KeastSong writing
In my spare time I like to do a bit of song writing as well...I recently posted a song I wrote on a couple of other websites and it got rave reviews. it's called "Waiting", it has no music with it because I am tone deaf and couldn't play an instrument if I tried so I guess I just call myself lyricist (I think that's the word for it?) So I thought I would post it to see what you guys think of it
Waiting
Fell into an ocean of confusion
So I got swept out in the tide
It doesn't seem to matter what I do
I can't escape the feeling of the current
Holding me back
Smashing my tired body to the bone
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
Feel like I'm losing a battle
I should be winning
I should be on the golden sand
I try to fight the ocean of green
But it keeps on pushing me back
Pushing me away from you
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
Tonight seems so far away
I just want the touch of your hand
To rescue me from the sharks
That keeps on circling me
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
Waiting
Fell into an ocean of confusion
So I got swept out in the tide
It doesn't seem to matter what I do
I can't escape the feeling of the current
Smashing my tired body to the bone
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
Feel like I'm losing a battle
I should be winning
I should be on the golden sand
I try to fight the ocean of green
But it keeps on pushing me back
Pushing me away from you
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
Tonight seems so far away
I just want the touch of your hand
To rescue me from the sharks
That keeps on circling me
I spent part of my life just waiting on the shore
Now here I am with the sea of fools
Who don’t know what to do
Except waiting for someone to come and rescue me
Waiting for something that probably won't arrive
In time
Waiting for someone to save me from dying here
Before all my dreams
Before all my dreams come to nothing
Now I'm just waiting for you tonight
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