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small poem for her

June 2nd 2008 08:50
There comes a point were a man need not another women,

point of transition,

ensuring change of maturity.

An accomplishment through discovery.

extreme happiness will over come,

rush of energy hath not hinder,

addiction now found in his prize,

For he will treat her like one. He knows she is one.

With no eye on the future, a sense there is.

Forever is implied with the speak of an honest tongue.



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Comment by Joel 3

June 4th 2008 08:52
I hope I reach that point someday.

Comment by slacko

June 4th 2008 09:10
It is an amazing feeling, its only been a week or so, but I already know I am crazy about her. For the first time in my life im actually stress free about a relationship. I wish the whole world could feel the way I do right now.

But joel, I know everyone will meet someone that will make them feel the way I do, and it is important to do everything you can to make them happy.

Sometimes things don't work out, but just know this, that god, fate or what ever you believe in has something better in store for you

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