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Depression Grew - by jan webb

Paragraph 18,Lost To Depression

November 13th 2008 18:43
It is not a place to lose ones self no doubt.Kind of like falling into a huge hole and discovering, there is no way out.I don't think I will ever find the path, but others have.
And it does leave just a bit of hope for me.Until that day arrives, I am lost to its control.This poem is how I feel when it removes itself, for at most, a day.Only to return in full force,
taking what control, I thought I'd gained

Lost To Depression



Ever so quietly, it beckons,

as, I succumb to its call.

I cannot see its presence

but, I damn sure feel the fall.

Within hours it has devoured

my entire universe.

Dousing any spark of life,

till, all that's left is hurt.

And so, begin the endless bouts

of doubt that plague my mind.

Leaving me to ponder,

why it is that I still breathe.

When the rest of me just wanders,

like a ship lost to the sea.

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