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Our Little World- Poem

May 10th 2008 18:29
A silly little girl

In a silly little world

where everythings peachy keen

No, It's all just a dream

I was told they loved me.

I cry, I cry

I was told they care

I lie, I lie

I was todl they needed me

I die, I die

I slowly die, deep inside

A torn little girl

In a crazy little world

Where everything can be seen

No, It's just a dream

I can't cry anymore

My eyes have grown sore

and my love has gone away

never to return, i say

I've given up,


I'll just look away.

A smart little girl

In a cold little world

This girl has gone away

Never to come back.

She's gone for good today.

This was a poem I wrote, I don't even know how long ago... I was still in high school, so for sure a few years... I don't ever like what I write so i'm not a good judge on such things..

Love and Karma,
Danielle
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