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ONE BEING TWO END

October 20th 2008 14:22
Dernier, rested for a while, lots, much information, in his mind! then pain, his skin was peeling, Why? help! pain! do not like this pain! then from the peeled areas of his skin, came blood, dripping of him, deep cuts in his flesh, now appeared.

His world was opening up! it was almost as if the skin of the world was peeling off, and showing blood, there was a large area of the worlds skin dropping of and moving to the side, forming many huge cuts into the depths of the world, there was a slime, it was moving, but very slowly, Dernier, could just about make out its movements, then out of it came a creature, Dernier, recalled that something simlar to it had been vanquished by an ancestor of his many, many suns and moons ago, it saw him, but made no movement over to him.


Derniers' body was in pain all over, he took off his upper garments, in the vain hope that this would help, but only very slightly. Where should he go now? what should he do now? back, back to see Verbena!

The creature that came out of the slime, was watching Dernier, then in the sky Dernier saw lights coming down to the skin of his world, once everything had settled, there stood another creature, and they at once seeing each other entered in combat with each other.

VERBENA!!!!! cried Dernier, his world was peeling, at a faster rate all the time, he had to go back and find the others and find and save Verbena! would he get there in time, there was quite a distance to travel, many suns and moons, he must hurry up!

The sky was changing its colour, although slowly, his world was worsening, bigger cuts, deeper holes, thinning skin, more peeling skin and getting bigger. He had been riding his steed, though he was in pain, and could tell that his steed was hurting as well, skin was peeling of as well, he thought to himself that i was probably fair, for him to dismount, so he tried! But his steed would not let him! did his steed know or have any idea of what was happening? so on he went.


After many moons and suns, and not resting or consuming any nourishment, Dernier, saw his beloved home, Verbena he exclaimed, he shout her name again and again and shouted louder all time, but there was nothing no sign of life, of any one, any of the others or of Verbena.

On arriving, he could see, that it was not good, bodies, on the floor, his friends, they had all their skin peeled off, their flesh was lying decaying, the blood was soking in the garments that they were wearing, it was just piles of blood and flesh. Pain, PAIN, PAIN!!!!!! emotional pain, physcial pain, his skin was still peeling, the world was still peeling, and at an ever increasing rate.

Blood, moving crepping, slowly, deep, very deep holes, very deep cuts in the world, destruction. Dernier moved into the throne room, there he saw Verbena, He cried, tears from his eyes, emotional pain, Verbena!!!!!! knelling next to her, he cried "i could not help, i could not do anything, forgive me!" Verbena opened her eyes, and took a tight hold of Dernier and said "REBIRTH", she closed her eyes, and life left her body.

Dernier screemed, and gently put her body down and walked out side and some distance from his home, he stopped, watching his world, all around him collaspe, there was nothing he could do to save his world, anger, he could do absolutely nothing to stop it, then on the horizon, Dernier saw the same two creatures still in combat that he had seem some time ago, did they have any to do with this?

Then in the sky light, long strands of light, some of it moving towards him. The two creatures were still in combat, neither seemed to be getting the upper edge! then one strand of light hit him.

He was taken up, up in the strand of light, up into the sky, into orbit around his world, he could see his world, its pain, he could feel its pain and its hurts, its worries, he could see its past, ITS FUTURE.

One of the creatures that had been in combat on the surface, came over to Dernier, and said " you are one, you are the whole" At this point Dernier's world exploded, into nothing, no longer inexistance.

"Iam one, iam the whole, iam the past, iam the future, we are one, i understand now it is clear now" Dernier said nothing more.

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ONE BEING NINE

October 6th 2008 16:45
What was this? Dernier puzzled, and contemplated,emotion, this was not good strong, must be strong for Verbena, for our world, something was wrong, he had to find it, what was it, on a quest, darkness, the moons past, light, that past, it was all mixing into one, not real!

What was that, a noise, there it was again, body shaking, weapon skaking, fear, no,no,no not fear, That noise again, loud noise, there for an instant, was it an instant? what is an instant? short not long, loud again and again, getting nearer, shaking more violently now!
On the ground, what was that? it was green! blood!! it looked like blood, it was coming out the ground, blood from the ground.

A sharp idea entered his mind, was the ground alive? living, a living world! a living planet! was there more? emotions, excitment, fear, intrepidation, joy finally a realisation!

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ONE BEING EIGHT

September 8th 2008 17:45
Brightness from up above, what about below, was there a darkness or a brightness below, things, questions,irritations, manipulations, high above, indeed what was all this? all this was new, was something wrong? was this how it was meant to be? what was this meant to be? what was happening? what were these thoughts? there was pain inside him, ,what should he do? lay on the ground, was it ground? panic, wait it was ok no, sharpe pain, it was false.

Must move on, must move on, must try and go, must try and move, must leave, move!!!!!!
why, why must he move? Have been asked by Verbena! must do as was asked!, fear, fear
he knew it was not to his liking, to seek out trouble, find the source? what source? where is the source?

Verbena, yes Verbena, i must, i must carry on for Verbena, panic, body, not working, not moving, let me go! these thoughts, let me go!!! must go on for Verbena, on i must go, fear, pain, horror, where am i now? i do not not know this place, i do not recoqnise this place, body movement, unsure, irrational movement of the body, why? body beating at a higher rate!, feelings, go, go, go, quest, Verbena, all for her, she asked him, must go on, no fear, no pain, no horror!

There was darkness and then there was brightness, this happened a number of times, or did it? was not sure, must go on, fear, pain, must move on and on fear, pain, excitement, apprehension, joy, no surely not joy, not here why? where was the joy here? After fear, after pain, then after excitement, is this right?
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ONE BEING SEVEN

August 30th 2008 12:07
Two moons later he set out on his journey, of discovery, and one of tremendous importance to his kind and his world, he had many questions going through his mind at this time.

To say that he was feeling something, strange something that he was not used to, would only be the minimal amount, was what that was going to happen in the future be bearable or was it to prove unimaginable, even poposterous and even at times hilarious, there was a roller coaster of feelings, but were were all these things, these insane and opaque movements of his body, and indeed even his mind, should he even think abut it


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ONE BEING SIX

August 24th 2008 21:57
Dernier and Verbena suddenly became asttutely aware something was wrong. Dernier went to visit Verbena three moons later, and he mentioned that something felt wrong, the atmosphere, all seemed wrong, she agreed that there was something out there and everything was not as it should be, there was something that was not meant to be in her realm, and this troubled them very badly.

Verbena then instructed Dernier to go out and seek the source of this trouble and to take action in response to it, this of course depended on what it was


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ONE BEING FIVE

August 24th 2008 12:48
She also learnt that she was to be expected to have offspring as well, who would also one day rule her realm, as she was doing. Verbena was not really interested in that side of things, she was expected to pick a suitor, marry and then mate with them.

But it was her duty, and part of the tradition, of her knid, could she change it, did she have the will and authority to do it? She could either be setting a precedence or maybe cause a civil war? Did she really want to take that risk


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ONE BEING FOUR

August 16th 2008 22:28
The offspring were maturing and growing, Adrian himself was ageing, and was not sure how many more moons and suns he would see. He called his offspring to see him; they both came immediately upon his command, as they knew that he would not live for much longer, Verbena came in first before Dernier.

Whwn they were both there, Adrian told them that Verbena was going to rule as queen and that Dernier was to give her his full loyalty and devotion as his queen, and as such he should give her his respect (something that she should expect anyway and receive), there was to be no quarrels


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ONE BEING THREE

August 11th 2008 17:36
He did know one thing though, and that was that he did not want to meet anything like that again, he felt that if there was a next time, that he was not going to be quite so fortunate as he had just been. The creature that he had slain, had seemed like a young inexperienced entity, so this made him think, that there was a possiblity, that there were more of them? What did they want now after all these suns and moons, that have surely passed by now and since?

Many suns and moons, had now passed by, Adrian was now kning, and he had completely forgotten all about that creature and the time that he had had to slay it on his long journey, when he was young


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ONE 2 BEING AGAIN

August 11th 2008 14:15
Prince Adrian took out his sword from the dying creatures body, his hand was covered with his own blood and the creatures, that he had just slain. The creature's blood was not of a normal clour that you might expect. It was thick and mixed with his own, as though it was in its' self a living organism devouring his. After watching this for some time, with pure disbelief and bewildermenr he put his hands in a pool of shallow water, and watched the blood mixture, try and move, to climb out of the water, the blood mixture appeared to be downing, but this was not a normal reaction, this should not be happening! he quickly washed off the blood, that was remaining on him and his sword, completely riding himself of it.

Prince Adrian then tidied himself, climbed on Jaycee and proceeded with his journey to Terrace with all speed. The blood in the water began to coagulate; the dead creture began to decompose, and in a very shot time had all but disapeared, except one tiny fragment


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ONE 2 BEING

August 4th 2008 17:53
The sky was clearing, after an extremely violent strom, the clouds were moving away, this enabled the three suns to shine onn the damp, wet surface and the humid environment, to what could only be considered to be a more manageable temperature, this lead to an explosion of activity and movement, all forms of life began to make an appearence, on land, life was just beginning to venture out from all its hiding places, under rocks, in the nocks and crannies.

Whilst in the seas, life was becoming more active, espacially in the shallower areas, where the suns rays would be able to penetrate and warm up the seas temperture. Here in this place, on this world life was reaching out and claiming this world as its' own. The was a time for exploration and excitment, what new oppportunites were in front, there was much to be seen and done, much learning and understanding to acquire, new knowledge, the future appeared to bright, there was much to see, much to do! and much to find. How exciting this was for all forms of life, could they share what was found? Would they still be happy as they are now in the far distant future? did they have a future? It was thought that they would still all be happy, as they were all now! after all why not? why should they not carry on? why should anything change? It was inconceivable that it should change! it was decided that it was not even worth thinking about, this was harmony! surely it would last for ever


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