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Ode to Ashleigh

October 25th 2007 13:16


You are oft the forgotten one, who never shone as bright
But somehow at this moment you are my gleaming ray of light.
A random act of kindness, small but oh so right
Has brought me joy and comfort, love, instead of spite.

My heart it swells with proudness, my mind is of good cheer.
I go towards tomorrow now without such dread and fear.
And if I've caused you hurt at all, made you shed a tear.
I'll live only to regret it, of that, you have no fear.

My special one, who is so deep, who knows me all so well,
The one who is my confidante to whom my secrets tell.

You've brought me light and laughter, lifted me, when I fell.
Oh laud be your glorious, good nature, which seeks naught to rebel.
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Comment by Lyn

October 25th 2007 13:27
Okay, naught should have been nought (as in not) and another rhyming word for fear??? keeping the context of the piece of course, any suggestions??

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