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Occam's Razor - by Adam Williams

An Unexpected Gift

June 3rd 2011 15:13
He put everything back into the pouch and placed it into his pocket. For now he would hold on to it while he buried his family. He went outside and made a fire for cooking on. He noticed that he had built up quite an appetite in his fighting. Tomasz gathered some vegetables from his house and some meat. He roasted the vegetables over the fire and put the meat on a spit. Everything was cooking nicely now and the smells made his hunger insatiable. This is what he loved; good vegetables grown on his own farm and meat from a cow he had nourished since it was a calf.
He finished his meal and returned to his house. He decided that since it was late and he was extremely tired, he would set about digging graves in the morning. In the meantime, he would simply cover the bodies in cloth.
He went into his room and put the pouch under his pillow. He went back outside to bathe and stoke the fire. After he was finished, he looked into the sky, resigned. He dropped to his knees and said a prayer for the dead. Again, he mourned his family and his dead friends and neighbors. Finally, he returned to his room to go to sleep.
“My darling, wake up,” A voice said.
Tomasz opened his eyes and looked around his dark room. He saw a figure but couldn’t make out who it was. Likewise, the voice was unfamiliar to him. She stepped into the moonlight through the open window and Tomasz gasped. The maid who had visited him when he was a prisoner was standing in front of him. Tomasz’s blood ran cold with fear.
“Don’t take me back to that place, I will fight if you try to take me back,” He said.
“Shhhh, it’s okay, you are safe from them. They will not bother you anymore.”
“Abyzou, why are you here?” He asked.
“I am here because you have something of mine.”
“Is it the pouch, I wondered what it meant,” Tomasz said.
She smiled, clearly having knowledge of something that Tomasz didn’t.
“Did you notice the bodies of your children?” She asked.
“Well, yes, the life was gone from them. That monster murdered them!” He said, his anger flaring once more.
“Dear Tomasz, you did not look closer? You did not see that only Piotr was bloody?”
He paused, considering her question.
“Y-yes,” He hesitated.
Now that she had said it, he did notice something peculiar about Izabella and Janusz. They did not appear to have any wounds, as if the way they died was something natural. There was no blood, no trace of an injury. It was almost like they had gotten sick and died in a matter of minutes.
Abyzou could see thoughts crossing Tomasz’s face and finally, confusion.
“What happened? Did they get sick while I was away?”
Abyzou reached into her pocket and pulled something out. The darkness of the room shielded what was in her hand. She reached out to him and grabbed his hand. From her other hand she placed a silver ring into his. On the ring was a circle with two horizontal lines going through it, one through the top and one through the bottom.
“What am I supposed to do with this?” He asked.
“Wear it of course. The ring will guide you on your travels and lead you to the one who is truly worthy.”
“Worthy of what?”
She just shook her head and blew him another kiss as she walked out of the room.
Bewildered, Tomasz walked outside after her. She was gone and any trace of her left with her.
Fresh air was what he needed after this strange encounter with the beautiful maid. He went out and decided to go for a walk. He walked over to where his fire had been and noticed there were a few hot coals left. He gathered up some leaves and cloth and bound them together along with a piece of wood. He placed the wood into the coals and immediately had a torch.
Satisfied, he walked around his house and into the woods that were a few yards away. He listened to the sounds of the night; the crickets chirping and the frogs croaking. The nightingales were singing their nightly songs of sorrow. The wind blew through the trees and he heard the rustling of leaves. It was sublime to him, all these sounds of nature in perfect harmony with the night. Along the forest floor, mice scampered to and fro looking for shelter. An owl hooted somewhere in the distance.
Tomasz looked up at the moon, which was full and pregnant. The stars shimmered brightly and the light made the trees glow with silver light. Some sort of flying animal raced by, a bird or a bat perhaps. He continued walking until he reached a narrow stream. He sat down on the bank and put his feet in the water. He sighed contentedly. Finally he was able to relax after the terrible events of the past two days. With his feet in the water and the cool breeze touching his skin, he began to have a little hope for the future. Something was nagging him though. He couldn’t get the last words Abyzou spoke out of his head: “The ring will guide you on your travels and lead you to the one who is truly worthy.”
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Seven Petals

April 21st 2011 01:16
“Abyzou? Abyzou?” Tomasz asked.
His brain worked as hard as it could trying to recall why this name was familiar to him. Exhaustion and dehydration was screwing with him hard. He couldn’t quite put his finger on it.
She didn’t answer him, only blew him a kiss and danced her way out of the cell. He jolted awake. He looked around his cell frantically and saw someone in the doorway. It was one of the guards. The guard began jabbering in his bizarre language again and held a bowl in his hand. He handed the bowl to Tomasz, which was filled with dirty water. Tomasz drank the water greedily, not caring that it probably had a bug in it that would make the water come out the other end as fast as he was drinking it. His throat felt instantly better as the water soothed his cracked and bloody lips. He looked up at the guard and nodded to him, saying thank you in his own bizarre language.
They nursed him back to health, feeding and watering him every day for the next month. Vitality returned to his muscles and bones. He almost felt as good as he did when he was home. Almost. One day three guards came in and grabbed him, forcing him out of the cell. They pushed him into a line of other prisoners and they all were shepherded into an armory. The prisoners were beaten and made to put on armor and grab weapons. Some prisoners were stupid enough to try and overtake their captors and these foolish men were promptly killed. Tomasz saw no way out of this.
After he got his equipment he was pushed outside to meet many others who were ready to go into battle. They marched their way back to Tomasz’s village, ready to lay waste to the entire countryside. The men of his own village were there waiting, standing strong and ready to defend their homes, their people, and their lives. Tomasz was forced to fight his own people. Men he knew and respected came charging at him, weapons ready. Tomasz was no warrior, but he did manage to overcome many of these men. He subdued them, and as they fell he whispered to them that it was he, Tomasz, and he did not want to kill them.
They understood and fell to the ground, waiting for Tomasz’s signal to get up and fight again. He told them he would be back, but first he had to go to his house and make sure his wife and children were safe. One man looked at him and shook his head. Tomasz knew what this meant, but he had to go. He ran to his house to find it had been ransacked and his children were dead.
His wife was screaming and telling someone to get off of her. Tomasz ran into his bedroom and saw someone on top of his wife. She looked up, terror on her face. She saw Tomasz and a glimmer of hope crossed her eyes. She hesitated in her screaming and the man on top of her raised his head and saw Tomasz standing there. He pulled out a knife and smiled at him. Tomasz thought he would get up and come for him, but instead, the man plunged the knife into the woman’s chest. Tomasz screamed so loudly and completely that the man faltered. Rage was in Tomasz’s eyes and he pulled out his own knife and charged the man. He moved so quickly that the man didn’t have time to react. Tomasz cut his throat and the man collapsed on top of Tomasz’s wife.
He moved to him, trying to roll him off her as fast as he could. The man was big and heavy. When he finally managed to move the man he saw it was the guard that gave him the water. Shock hit him for a moment. Then, he looked at his wife, still alive and gasping for breath. Blood poured out of her chest and it was covering her dress and the bed. He knelt by her and put his hand on the wound, trying to slow the bleeding. It was no use. The wound was on the left side of her chest where her heart was. He wailed and screamed, trying desperately to stop the bleeding. His wife’s eyes began to glaze and he shook her, pleading with her not to die. Their eyes met and in the moment before she died, her eyes told him she loved him and she was sorry.
He ran out of his house, past his dead children and returned to his village’s men. He was in a fury now and told them to stay a little longer while he went to get weapons for them. Every Ottoman soldier he found he ravaged and cut their heads from their bodies. He ran and fought, ran and fought. Finally he had enough weapons to mount a revolt. He found every man from his village that was still alive and able to make a stand. There were a surprising number of men who were overlooked in the pillaging. They all took up their new weapons and charged at the Ottomans.
Hours of fighting ensued and as the blood red sun began its descent over the hills of that small village, the rebels pushed the Ottomans back. The village was burning and screams of the dying rang out. God had closed His eyes for a moment and this was the result. Blood was in the sky with the sun and blood was in the fields and farms. The Ottomans retreated to their camp and the remaining villagers were banding together to silence the wails in the fields. One by one, they went about their task solemnly. Each man was mourning, mourning for their own dead, mourning for the village, and mourning that God had stepped away for a bathroom break.
Tomasz walked slowly back to his home. He felt an ache is his heart as he thought of his beautiful wife and children, the four people he loved dearly, gone through the veil of shadows. Sorrow overtook him and he collapsed on the path, weeping frantically. If he was like this now, how would he be when he actually saw them, broken beyond repair? He gathered his courage and pressed on.
When he returned, he knelt beside the bodies of Janusz and Izabella, both crumpled on the ground like puppets whose strings have been cut. He took them both in his arms and cluched them to his chest. A shutter ran through him as he cried deeply for them. Slowly, he rose to his feet and walked to the body of Piotr. Piotr’s body was badly beaten and bloody but in one little hand was a knife. Tomasz swelled with pride in his heart with the knowledge that his son had died trying to protect his family. To him, there was no greater honor than this.
Next, he went to the room he shared with his wife. He sat on the bed next to her and he slid his arm underneath her and lifted her up. He hugged her fiercely and kissed the top of her head. Her limp body leaned heavily against him as if to seek the strength and security of his arms. He began crying again.
“My darling,” He said, “You have been avenged and now you may go on. Be restless no more and wait for me. I will see you again in the meadow. Take good care of our babies.”
He kissed her gently on the lips and brought her into the sitting room. She placed her body next to those of his children. He began to clean them off with water from a bucket nearby. He got some strips of cloth and carefully wiped blood and dirt from each of their faces, arms, and the rest of their bodies. When he reached Piotr, he noticed a small pouch in his hand.
He opened his son’s hand and took the pouch. It was made of soft leather that felt good in his hands. He weighed it carefully and noticed that it was filled with an amulet. On the amulet was the depiction of a serpent eating its own tail. Next to the amulet were white rose petals. As he emptied the pouch he noticed a total of seven petals.
“Seven petals,” Tomasz thought, “and a strange amulet to go with them.”
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The Master

November 17th 2010 01:20
Deep underground, Kurong walked purposefully toward an antechamber. It was dark and musty and the room smelled foul. Cobwebs were in every corner and large, menacing spiders scuttled along waiting for a helpless morsel to become ensnared in their webs. Blood faintly covered parts of the brick wall, each streak signifying the end of something. If Kurong had the power to hear voices, he’d hear the screams and wails of people long since dead. However, he did not and could not hear these voices. To him, this room was a glimpse into what lay beyond in the larger hall.
Kurong was not alone. With him was a short, muscular man who had been in his mid-thirties when he was made. He had rich, grass green eyes, high cheekbones, and a bulbous nose. His skin was tan, but not overly tan. His hair was short and dyed black. The man’s natural hair color was more of an auburn color, but at this point in the story that was irrelevant. What was relevant was that this man was Kurong’s sire. Tomasz had seen many things in his one thousand years, the fall of Rome, the fall of the Ottoman Empire, hell even the fall of the Napoleonic Empire. None of these really mattered to Tomasz except the Ottomans.
He recalls they were a savage bunch of Neanderthals, worse than the Mongols, in fact. He remembers their women were humble looking with their warts and stringy hair. Man, was he glad they didn’t win in the end. In the end, everyone lost. He remembers being dragged away from his little farm in what is now Poland and thrown into a squalid hole in the wall called a cell. He was beaten constantly and lost hope of ever returning home to his wife, Magda and their children. He recalls how scared he was and how Piotr would have to be the man now. Piotr was only nine years old. Their other two children, Izabella and Janusz, were three. The little twins were barely old enough to know who their father was and in time, they would forget if he didn’t get out of this God forsaken place.
Tomasz had been yelling in the cell for what seemed like days. His voice was almost gone and his arms and hands ached maliciously with all the banging on the door and walls. People would come in from time to time to talk to him in some bizarre language. When he couldn’t understand them, they promptly beat him senselessly. After the beating, they’d have a chamber maid come tend his wounds and feed him. Many times the maid would make sure he could see her ample bosom, but when he refused her every time she’d stalk off out of the room. The last time anyone came in was four days ago. He was very thirsty and was beginning to think they had forgotten all about him.
The next day Tomasz was lying on the ground, unable to stand any longer. He was weak and hadn’t been able to move. He slipped in and out of consciousness, having crazy dreams. In one of these dreams he saw a chamber maid come in to his cell. She began dancing, pirouetting to a tune only she could hear. The movements were so graceful and beautiful that he began to weep. She walked over to where he sat in the corner and knelt beside him. She whispered softly to him.
“Soon, you will be free of this place and you will be reunited with your family.”
He stared up at her, hopefully.
“The savages here will be vanquished, the Hungarians are on their way. Soon, my dear, you will live again.”
“What is your name?” Tomasz asked.
“Names are unimportant, but if you must call me something, then you may call me Abyzou.”
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Defending the Home

September 10th 2010 23:44
He opened it in time to see William frozen where he stood. Kurong was back and he was standing only feet from William. He reached his hand out and William moved to take it. Occam only had time to do one thing. He knelt down where the bloody bag was, grabbed it, and flung it across the lawn. Kurong broke his concentration and moved for the bag. Occam grabbed William and rushed him back inside.
“What did you do with the protection you had on this place,” Occam asked, his voice urgent.
“I-I moved them,” Cordelia said


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Revelations

August 5th 2010 14:35
Occam walked to the house, passing William’s car. A pulse of energy hit Occam like he walked into a wall. He searched for the edge with his hand and walked around it, being careful not to hit it again. Cordelia watched with silent fascination. Once he reached the doorway he stopped abruptly. He put his hands out in front of him and to his sides, measuring the space. When his hand didn’t connect with anything he continued inside.
William was standing in the kitchen rinsing out a glass by the sink. When he saw Occam he dropped the glass. A hollow tinkling came from the sink as the glass fell. He looked down and saw that the glass was not broken but the sound did startle him. Cordelia walked over to him and put a hand on his arm, calming him down. William continued to stare at Occam.
“Forgive me for asking, but do you have a plastic bag? I don’t want this to soil your carpet,” Occam asked


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The Wraith

July 2nd 2010 00:46
Fifteen minutes later he was walking up to Cordelia’s house. He noticed the lights were still on inside. He looked around, being careful in case anyone was leaving their houses in the middle of the night. The street was dark and silent. He walked closer to the door and stopped. There was the faint trace of someone laughing nearby.
“You won’t be able to enter,” A voice said.
The voice was deep and raspy, thick with evil


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Unrequited

May 29th 2010 03:17
He reached the door of the motel room and sat down. He put his arms out again and moved them from side to side. He put one hand on his thigh and raised the other to the sky. He closed his hand as if grabbing something and touched that hand to the hand on his thigh. He moved both hands and the knife wound disappeared. He repeated the process with his face, chest, arm, and torso. After ten minutes each wound was gone, his clothes mended again. There were no signs whatsoever that he had just been in a fight to the death.
He knocked on the motel door and Nikki answered. She reached her hand out and brought him inside.
“Where’s Marie,” She asked


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The First Battle

May 19th 2010 05:14
Marie reached behind her neck and pulled out a short katana. She also lowered into a crouch, blade extended forward.
“Very nice blade, have you used it often?”
“Enough,” She replied


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The Prelude

May 7th 2010 05:53
An hour later, Occam and the woman emerged from the motel room. The night still retained its feeling of gloriousness to Occam and the past hour only served to improve his spirits further. The time would be soon that he could satisfy his thirst, but first, a little more playing would be in order. They separated briefly. The woman walked down to the store to buy a drink and to meet her friend. Occam wandered down the street in the opposite direction and began tasting the air again.
Five minutes later the woman returned with her friend. Occam noticed the smell of jasmine and vanilla in the air. He looked up at the friend and was startled badly. A wave of recognition passed through him. Was it really her? Surely not. The newcomer was a petite woman with sandy blonde hair and chocolate colored eyes. Her skin was milky white and perfect. She smiled broadly at Occam. Occam took her hand and kissed it gently.
“You didn’t tell me he was a gentleman Nikki,” the newcomer said


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An Encounter

April 29th 2010 17:37
Occam decided that he needed to find something to do while Cordelia and William were busy. He looked up and puckered his lips in a clearly thoughtful gesture. It was decided, he would go and get himself a bite to eat. Ten minutes later he found himself standing outside of the Bosendorfer lounge. Again he people watched, taking in the scents and smells of the people celebrating the weekend.
Sitting on a bench, he noticed a group of young women leaving the lounge. He thought to himself for a moment, wondering how each of them tasted. There were three of them; one was tall with platinum blonde hair and a short skirt revealing golden tanned legs. Another was a short, athletic looking blonde who resembled a soft ball player. Slightly mannish, she wore a scowl that seemed to eerily enhance her appearance rather than diminish it. She was wearing a pair of tight blue jeans and a long-sleeved shirt that buttoned down in front. Around her neck was a loose fitting tie. A third woman was a petite brunette wearing a long black skirt with high heels and a pink top with thin straps. She had her hair pinned up to reveal a long, delicate neck. Occam noticed that her hair was streaked white in the front. In one small hand was a designer handbag made by Chanel. In the other was a cell phone that chirped. She held it up to her ear and began talking into it absently. Her gaze settled upon Occam and she began to smile. Her smile revealed small white teeth like a child’s. He smiled back at her and she blushed.
In another lifetime he would have introduced himself to her. His charms would have a profound effect on her and soon she would be walking alone with him. They might walk around a corner into an alley. There he would kiss her and talk sweetly to her. She would start to like him and ask if he wanted to escort her to her car. Her car would be parked on a street with poor lighting and he would have his way with her. In another situation they might take a walk through a park where they would be able to enjoy each other’s company in relative privacy. He would hold her hand as they strolled. She would find him funny and handsome. They would sit down on a park bench and begin to kiss. Things of course, would go downhill quickly for her


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Visions

April 22nd 2010 19:21
She quickly grabbed the ring and put it on her thumb. A searing pain entered her head and she began to cry out. William grabbed her shoulders to steady her. Her eyes rolled up in her head and she began to shake. The pain was excruciating. Voices were getting louder, getting closer. An evil growling sound came next followed by screams of pain. A man began to laugh hysterically. She was frozen with the images and the screams in her head. The ring was paralyzing. She now saw the wraith that chased them in a large stone room. There was an altar with sinister looking tools on it and he was grabbing each one and examining it. He chose one and walked over to Cordelia.
A female voice spoke that seemed to be coming from behind her, only it wasn’t behind her, it was IN her. She was speaking to him but it wasn’t her voice. She couldn’t understand the language but she knew it was French. It sounded panicked and desperate. It sounded terrified.
The wraith came closer and she could see his face. His horrible, evil face stared at her. She saw the scars on his cheeks and the terrible teeth as he smiled. It was a wicked smile, one that showed full enjoyment of what was about to happen. She looked into his eyes and saw coldness and death. She decided that he was death incarnate. His eyes were a curious color, a mix of green and some darker color. She thought they might be red but couldn’t tell from the light


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Was it a Dream?

April 13th 2010 22:49
NOOO!!!
PLEASE STOP!!!
PLEASE, DON’T COME ANY CLOSER


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Rituals

March 21st 2010 00:40
Just as the car was about to run the figure down, the figure disappeared. There was a bang on the roof of the car and Cordelia could see, rather sense that the figure had flown into the air. She crawled into the backseat and looked out the window. She could see the faint outline of something in the air as they went away from it. It turned and veered to the right and out of her sight. William got back on the road and this time made a correct turn back onto the road that would take them to the highway.
They raced towards Interstate 4 deciding that they would go west to Tampa. They both knew that they had to put some miles between this place and them, only they didn’t know how many. If they knew beforehand, they’d take the Florida’s Turnpike north then take I-75 all the way into Georgia.
“The more distance, the better,” William thought


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Kurong

March 11th 2010 21:28
Cordelia looked up at the full moon and shivered. A feeling just rushed over her as if somewhere someone she knew was doing this exact thing.
"What's wrong Delia," William asked.
"Nothing," She sighed. "I guess a cat just walked over my grave


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