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My Song

February 20th 2007 04:23
I wrote some lyrics fairly recently. Writing them was very enlightening and therapeutic. See if you can guess the general jist of the song. It's called 'You'.

verse:

You never knew
you were descending through dark waters.
You never realized
you were becoming a monster.
You never saw that your
life was crashing down
As I stood back on the sidelines
and I
watched
you
drown.

You turned, you turned, you turned away
from all that you believed.
Yourself,
Your friends,
your family,
all of them deceived.
you turned to the thing

that that had hurt you the most
and it left you a
battered and broken ghost.

chorus:

You
You
You
It's all about you,
No one else,
nobody could compare.

You
You
You
It all comes back to you
But you were dreaming awake
and running scared.

verse:

And so she took your everything,
Your love,
Your mind,
Your pride.
And so she left, she left you
just a twisted wreck inside.

And still you couldn't turn from her,
though the solace there was gone.
She had broken your will, while she
Became your God.

Chorus:

You
You
You
It's all about you
No one else,
Nobody could compare.

You
YOu
You
And now it's just you
You drove away
all of those who cared.


Bridge:

How does it feel
To live life as a shell?
How does it feel
To put yourself through hell?
You've got
no one to blame
no one to blame
no one to blame
besides. your. self.

Chorus:

You
You
You
It's all about you

No one else
Nobody could compare.

You
You
You
It just can't be you
You were so human,
and now. you're. dead.



This is one of my serious posts. I'll try post something funny tonight, possibly about why I am now lying on the floor and flogging mangos in futile attempts to get laid / fend off boredom. Update to follow.
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