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December 22nd 2006 14:42

Fang's POV
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What I felt made my heart stop. Her pulse was back. Thank god!
" Max you are going to be all right. Max, Max, Max!"

Max's POV
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I woke with a start. Where was I? Fang walked over and sat beside me.
" Bad dream?" He usually had only 2 word sentences, if I was lucky I got 4 words out of him.
" I guess. But it felt so real, and extremely long." I rubbed my head. Great just what I needed, another one of my famous headaches.
" Well, you were out for 3 hours." Wait a second. That didn't sound right.
" Did you just say 7 words out loud, in a sentence?" Fang shrugged and lay down beside me. God, did he look hot or what. Wait NO! STOP MAX!
Maybe you like him.
Great my voice is back again. But maybe I did.
" Come on guys, let's go find a hotel." The entire flock cheered as they ran out of the water. Today was going fine. But that was the problem. Nothing ever goes right for us.


















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The Light

December 20th 2006 00:15
Fang's POV
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Ari lunged at me and all I could think was, " HE THREW MAX!" I quickly dodged out of the way. I threw a quick jab to his jaw, I heard a loud crack and immediatly followed with a side kick to his ribs. I heard a loud whoosh and that only fueled my rage even more. I landed an ax-kick on top of his head, which caused him to fall on the ground. I got on top of him and began to choke the life right out of him.

" You are going to wish that you were never born." Suddenly I felt a hand on my shoulder.
" Fang let go. He is out cold, and Max needs you." It had to be Nudge. She was the only one who could say that much in less than 5 seconds.
" What do you mean?" I realized that I had let go of Ari and was on my feet.
" She is dieing," Nudge said between sobs. I ran over to Max to discover that what she had said was true.
" Max, please you can't leave us now! You can't do this to me! I need you more than you think!" I noticed her head move and that was it. I felt for her pulse. To my horror I found none.
" Fang, she is dead. Ari killed her. Not with force but with words. What he said to her made her want to die, so she let herself." I was in denial. I knew that Angel spoke the truth, but I couldn't let myself believe her.
" Max, no, you can't be gone. I need you, I love you." Iggy pulled me off of her dead body. As we walked away I realized that a light had begun to shine behind us. When I turned around, I saw that Max was the source of light and she was floating in mid-air! The light began to fade and her body was put back down on the grass. We ran to her, and I felt for her pulse.
" Oh, my, god."
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Man This Sucks.

December 18th 2006 03:27
Driving away from my flock hurt so much that I would rather have cut off my arms, legs, and just about anything else on my body that would cause excrutiating pain.
You are being wise. You relised that you were trapped.
For once I just shut-up. I was too miserable.
" Take a left you MORON!!!!" Ari was in a great mood. I had no idea where we were going, and I had a odd feeling that I didn't wnat to know.
" We are gooing to have so much fun Maxie," Ari said in a weird voice.
" Shut-upo dog boy!" I was so not in the mood for him.
" I know that you liked that freak, what was his name, oh yeah Fang." I was starting to get angry. " But you will soon learn to love and appreciate me."
" Yeah, when hell freezes over," I retorted. To my surprise, he started laughing.
" Well, first thing that I am going to do to you is cut off your wings, so that you can't fly away, then I am going to make you learn some respect."
" And you telling this to me why? Oh yeah, you are a complete retard who seriously needs to get a life and get over the fact that your dad liked us better than his own son. You!" I was getting really nasty now. The next thing I saw was a ahiry eraser paw flying at my face, and then everything went black.
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Fang's POV

The flight was silent. Without Max, the others were miserable. We saw the white van beneath us. The same van that had carried Max off about two hours ago.
" Fang Max ios in there. But she is weak. She is trying to Die!!!" Angel suddenly said.
" WHAT DO YOU MEAN!!" I hadn't meant to shout.
" She has given up the will to live."
" Then we have to save her." With that we descended onto the van shattering the windshield. The van swerved and hit a tree. Ari and his pal climbed out. In Ari's arms was Max. She was unconcious(SP?) and in the bridal carry pose.
" You are going to wish that you had never been born," I stated calmy and viciously. But on the inside I was ready to kill him.
" Right back at cha'." Ari lunged at me and the fight had begun.






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Chapter 3

December 14th 2006 00:29
Fang's POV

Saying good-bye to Max was the hardest thing in the world. I loved her. finding her wold be even harder. Ari, the erasers, and Max (wow that hurts to admit) left about an hour ago. We were left sitting on the beach, stunned and lost.

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confession

December 14th 2006 00:14
My last chapter was so corny. I apologize. I had no idea what I was thinking. So again, I apologize.
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Info

December 10th 2006 15:04
Sorry about the confusion on what the characters are. They are Human-Avian hybrids. Which means that they are haf human half bird. They look like us, but have wings, hollow bones, air sacs, lungs, and assorted powers. They are super strong, have to eat alot, and fly. Erasers are half human and half lupain(SP?) or wolf. They are blood thirst killers sent tho kill the flock. Soon they will bi a third human, a third wolf, and a third bird or Avian. Again sory abou the confusion.
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continued

December 10th 2006 14:11
The beach was deserted. GOOD,I hate crowds. Actually, I despise them.
Stay alert Max. My voice wasn't helping. No freaking duhI retorted in my head. Gazzy, Iggy, Fang, Angel, and Nudge had already changed into their bathing suits. I went to a changing tent which was literally a tent. I reached into my backpack for a bathing suit, but instead I pulled out a bikini.
" No effing way!" I practically ripped apart my backpack looking for a one piece. But knowing my luck I never found one.

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Chapter 2

December 9th 2006 00:01
MAX"S POV

Ari growled at and lunged at me. I quickly dogged out of the way. He was getting faster. Not a good thing. I heard Nudge giggling. What could be so funny? I cast glance behind me just in time to see Angel make an eraser dance. Great, at least they are having fun. I focused a kick to Ari's ribs. With a sickening crack I smiled. One little rib went to the market.... Just then Ari punched me in the face. NOTE TO SELF: Pay attention to giant hairy dude who is about to try to kill you


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This Isn't Going to be Pretty

December 5th 2006 02:36
My last chapter was totaly gay, so I decided to start a new chapter.

Chapter 1


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Not Ari, Not Again

November 30th 2006 21:04
Chapter 1-

I went around camp doing my usual kid-to-wakeup routine. First Angel, The mind-reader, then Nudge, the extemely talkative one who could sense peoples past presence by air vibrations, Iggy, the blind pyro, Gazzy, the insane little kids who could mimic any sound he hears, and last but not least Fang, the semi-hot mutant bird boy who I had been crushing on for as long as I can remembe. Iggy got started on breakfast. I know what you are thinking, how can the blind kid cook? Well, he is the only one who can. Get it, got it, good. Angel rubbed her eyes


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