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The Words of WarSan (3)

November 6th 2009 03:41
For three days, we waited.

The cave on the beach sheltered us, and on that first morning, as the sky began to lighten, I and the tribe went out on to the beach to watch.

The beach was a tiny thing. It was long, but the strip of sand was barely three paces wide before it met sharp rocks. From beyond the rocks was dark soil, from which large trees were growing, so fast that before the true light came to the sky, they were mammoth.


The dawn twilight took a long time. We were patient. We ate fruit, we held hands, we spoke to each other of the wonder of life.

Always, OmTa and I were hand in hand.

The whole tribe was sitting quietly on the beach when Twisun came into the sky. First, we saw an immense, glittering cloud. Then the edge of a bright sphere, moving, and so suddenly, within breaths, it had risen above Om's circumference, far off to our right, two spheres of pure light, revolving about one another in an incandescant cloud.

In silence, we watched it, filled with awe. It brough light. It brought warmth. By its light, we saw the land rising about us, still bare and brown, but with trees growing. Thus far the only greenery was around the cave mouth.

For three days we ate fruit. We talked, we slept.

In dawn twilight of the fourth day we walked to the castle. It took us some time. We saw the black spires of the towers jutting to the sky, and followed our path towards them.

The castle, when approached, seemed a dreadful place. I could discern no smell, but it seemed repulsive to me, as if it pushed us away. The rock that made it was so black, the lava flowing thickly about its base.

We sat on the dirt, and waited.

Before long Kalla and Lucifer came forth. They stood on the drawbridge. Behind them came their followers. Some were missing, and at their loss I felt a knot of helplessness inside.

We watched each other.

I understood, she wanted to destroy us. She had planned to hunt us. That we had come for her had made her uneasy. She was reluctant to attack. I realized, the beast knew a kind of fear, an uncertainty. Perhaps, that would be the beginning of her downfall.

I had no doubt, the bitch would fall.

At the prescise moment it seemed none of us could wait any longer, Twisun rose from its bed and bathed us in warmth and light. The witch flinched, and her consort covered his eyes. I understood - the light hurt them. One group would have to move.

But before we could a great cry split the air. It seemed to come from everywhere at once, from above, and below, a great exaltant shriek.

I smiled. For the first time, I knew confidence.

From above the spires of the castle a white shining form appeared. Its wings filled the sky, its form glowed, reflecting and absorbing light, so it seemed made of crystal, glittering, shining....


Like a blazing star.

She arrowed towards us, the wind of her flight stirring up dust and mist. She landed between us, the drawbridge and our tribe, slightly to the left of me. OmTa grasped my hand, and I felt her smile match my own.

The form was dragon, and such a dragon! She could have crushed me in her great talon as I could crush a small nut, so great was she. Her face was detailed and beautiful, with huge yellow green eyes and slitted pupils. Her wings were reptilian yet feathered on the ends, great whispering fronds. Her neck and tail weaved with incredible grace. Her scales were each one a different shade of iridiscent white, cream, pale beautous shining coulours from which the light of Twisun glanced and shone.

Her ear flaps were like her sisters, long finlike appendiges at the top of her dragon skull. She had a pair of crystal horns, and between her horns was a crown of shining pearls.

"I am Areyamathea, Queen of Dragons." She spoke, in a voice like music, trilling, deep, resonant. Her reptile eyes fixed upon the frozen form of Kalla.

"You cannot stop me, Curiosity!" Screamed Kalla, all the power of her voice and form dwindling before this great Queen, "I am rage, I am Fear, I am Bloodlust! I am first, and I direct this creation!"

Areyamathea tilted her great head to the side, observing her. "You are split, demoness, in your representation. Because you hold three, and I am only one, I am greater than you. My potency is deeper."

"But you cannot defeat me!" Hissed the witch, "I live in mens hearts and womens souls! I cannot be killed!"

"What you say is true," The dargon smiled, and such a sight that was! "But greater forces than you exist in this universe. There is that which can defeat you, and that is what we witness here today! Behold the Queen of Goldenstone!"

Areyamathea clapped her great front claws together, rearing back on her hind legs to do so. The force of her clap shook each of us, and the red witch looked fearfully into the moat by her side, which had begun to bubble.

I realized then, that we are slaves to our human shape. Though we represent and embody specific emotions, we were each creatures capable of experiencing the full spectrum. Even her, the witch.

The bubbles in the lava grew larger, and all eyes were locked on to that place. The lava sighed, heat, mist, was released.......And from the very lava rose the shape of a woman. She came fast, in only a breath she was there, fully formed, feet hovering above the lava. The rivers of red ran off her skin until she hung there clean and white with skin as pale as the stars themselves. Her long hair swirled over her shoulders, thick to her waist and black as night. Her eyes opened, and they were blue as the sea. As the final drops of lava red fell from her feet, the moat turned blue as her eyes, a sudden flash of colour that raced around the base of the castle.

Smiling, the woman spread her hand and floated through the air until she hung above the earth. She reached down with a dainty toe and placed both feet upon the earth.

Something screamed - every cell on Om's skin shrieked in exaltation. Areyamathea had her great eyes closed, claws digging gently into the soil. As the womans feet touched the soil, a great flood of green grass sprang from the earth and flew across her surface like fire. Suddenly everything was green, so many shades of it, up in the trees, in bushes and grasses, and beautiful blue and purple flowers sprang up around her feet, trailing away from her in joyous tendrils.

"I am Xiara!" She cried, "I am the Queen of Goldenstone!"

At her words the walls of the castle seemed to crack, the black skin flaking off, crumbling, falling into the moat to be swallowed by its purity. Underneath the walls were pure, pearlescant gray of clouds, some shot through with ivory viens. Every fifth stone was a pale gold.

Lucifer was on his knees, weeping. Those who followed them were all confused, some looking at us, others at Xiara and Areyamathea, and there were those who kept their cold hard eyes on their queen, Kalla.

Kalla stood straight and true, taller than Xiara, staring at her enemy. The two faced one another.

"You." Spat Kalla, "You are Choice"

Xiara assented with a tilt of her head. "I am choice. I am its form. My presecence enables those without great will to choose......For you. Or against you. Feel their hearts, Kalla. Feel their souls. They do not choose you."

Kallas green eyes narrowed, "It matters not! I cannot be killed! Rule if you will Queen of nothing! I shall remain, with my consort and my followers, and know that while I live I shall gather strength to move against you! Ours is the way, we are the stronger, and your kingdom of peace shall fall to me!"

Areyemathea spoke, "That cannot be allowed to come to pass"

Kalla looked at her in horror and shock, finally sensing that events were fully out of her control. Areyemathea gathered herself and let forth a burst of green dragon flame from her mouth and nostrils. Kalla and her followers dived for cover, out of the way.

The flames had engulfed, obliterated, the form of Lucifer.

On her knees, Kalla screamed, "He cannot be killed! What have you done with him!"

"His form is no more," Areyamathea said. "He resides in Om's molten core, safe, protected. From there he may whisper, but he shall not have physical form again." Her eyes fixed upon the witch.

Kala reached out, grabbed one of her followers. This ones eyes had cleared upon seeing the dragon and the queen, and now looked terrified. This was one who had not known there was choice.

Kalla placed a splayed hand of sharp edged nails on the womans belly. I saw something red pass down her arm, from hand to womb. Defiantly, Kalla faced the Dragon.

"Destroy me then! Take my form! But know this - into this innocent woman I have placed a babe. It shall wear my face and have my form. From this curse, I tell you now, into every generation my body shall live. Into every generation there shall be those who choose to worship me! If they desire, they can call my soul into the form that was once mine. This shall be called The Cult of Lucifer, in honour of those emotions that are truly strong, that truly rule the world and direct the universe! So destroy my body you may, but I can never be destroyed!"

She faced the dragon, looking straight into its eyes.

Areyemathea engulfed the witch in flames. To my horror, the witch laughed as she was burned to ashes.

Those who had remained true to her, perhaps eight of them, ran into the newly made forest. One, a female, stopped, turned, looked at the one who was now pregnant with the witch's body. She looked long, to affirm she could not forget the face, and then followed her breathren.

"WarSan," said the dragon, "I have a task for you."

"Anything, Great One"

"I am prophetess, I am Saviour. Omecka herself has beseeched me to give you this great task. This mistake shall not ever be repeated. Some of her peoples must ever be set apart from the rest of life. You are to choose ten males, ten females, and travel south west into the high crags of the Wolf Mountains. Life will be hard, but Om and your faith in her shall serve you. "

I stood. "As you will it, great one." I gestured with my hand, and OmTa and a crowd stood. I did not need to choose them, now that Xiara was here, they were able to choose for themselves. They began to walk south west, knowing the journey was to be a long one. I looked at Areyemathea for the final time.

"One more thing, WarSan." The dragon whispered, "Om would not have you worship her. You shall revre her, if you wish, and give her homage, but she shall not be your God. You shall worship the first animals to walk her soil"

From behind me, I heard small footsteps.

I turned, and racing towards us were great, large, furry creatures. Patterned white, black, grey, with long snouts, four paws and high fluffy tails. They raced past me, through my tribe, to race ahead and leave us a path of paw prints to follow.

The last one, the largest, stopped and threw her paws on my chest, panting into my face. Each paw was easily the size of my chest muscles. She barked once, and chased after the pack.

"Wolf" I whispered, the word rising unbidden to my lips.

"And you shall be the Wolfen" Said Xiara, " Apart from all clans and tribes, alone in your worship of The Mighty Wolf Pack"

"So shall it be" I whispered.

OmTa beakoned, "Come husband!" And I followed, turning my back on the dragon, the Queen, and the peoples left behind.

These are the words of WarSan.

This is the stroy, as it is told by each Great Chief, passed down generation by generation.

These are the Words of WarSan as spoken my me, Om-Ra, the seventh Great Chief of the Wolfen Tribe.
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The Words of WarSan (2)

November 5th 2009 01:54
So we ran.

All of the earth looked the same, through the rain, there seemed no direction, no place to run to. The sky had darked and it seemed as if the air itself had turned to shadow. I felt as if we were cursed, created to be devoured, chased, hunted. As if the darkness conspired with Kalla and all was bent under her will.

Little was I to know, it was merely Omecka's first night.

My companions and I ran until we met the sea - a tiny strip of white sand and crashing, foaming waves that looked to me like toothy jaws. Still, the rain fell. And here we were, cold in the still driving rain and the dark, driven to the sea, held in a trap.

My very nature rose up in me, the nature of Savagery. I knew not what the witch and her consort embodied, and though I knew it was true I was a part of them, I knew I was not like them. I would not stand for this. I would fight, if needs be.

It was then I noticed the cave.

It was over to my left in the curve of earth where beach met the land. I urged my companions toward it, and quickly we sheltered inside. It was strangely warm and comforting, and there was a vague luminescence in the walls that allowed us to see.

Movement waved about the entrance, and I saw plant leaves for the first time. To my utter amazement, they were growing before my eyes. Deep green, wide flat leaves, with tiny formations curling along their lengths to create larger trees. Large, dark violet blossoms, and smaller, white flowers bloomed, until finally small bunches of red spheres appeared.

Without thinking, I took one and bit into it. The sensation was impossible to describe, sweetness and nourishment flooded me and I encouraged my brothers and sisters to take fruit too.

I understood, Omecka had always intended her evolution to catch up with ours. If they had only waited....

But I knew that was false. Those would never wait. Would have chosen that path no matter how quickly Omecka provided alternatives.

Sitting with my back against the rock, third fruit in my hand, I then noticed the woman.

She was taking fruit to those who were exhausted and could not stand, stroking their faces tenderly and encouraging them to eat. Telling them it was alright. She had a grasp of language that I did not. By her very touch, she comforted, brought love. She noticed me watching her, and came towards me.

She was not tall, like Kalla and me, but not short, if we had been standing, her head would have been level with my mouth. From watching my brothers and sisters, I had noticed I was quite a bit taller than anyone else. Our skins were all of a slightly different hue, mostly variations of tarnished cream. Something I would come to know as 'tanned'. This woman had thick yellow hair, deep eyes brown as the branches the fruit grew from, and a strong wide jaw.

I realized, like me, she was weathered, sturdy.

She sat beside me, and placed a hand on my thigh. For the first time I knew the seductive sensation of touch. Something in the tilt of her head and glint in her eye moved me deep inside.

"WarSan" She whispered.

"OmTa" I answered, smiling for the first time, "You are Gentleness"

She smiled too, "I am the opposition of your Savagery."

"You are my pair"

"I am your mate"

Despite all, all that had happened and the uncertainty of what was to happen, we laughed. We clasped hands, and as we did so, smiles and laughter spread through the tribe. We had made Togetherness, Community, and as a whole we were strengthened by it.

I leaned forward and brushed her hair back, clasped her cheek in my palm and she leaned into my touch. For a moment I felt something so profound, I was almost moved to my first tears, I felt my eyes pricked in a joyous pain. "OmTa" I whispered, smelling her.

"WarSan," She whispered, "I have intuition. There is smeone on the beach who needs to speak with you."

"Will I return?"

She smiled, "Very soon, My Love" My heart leapt at her words, at the feeling behind them, My Love.....

I rose, turning my back on the gathering noise of the trible as they discovered speech, and touch, and walked on to the beach.

The rain no longer drove so hard, though the wind whipped it about. Accompanying the sound of waves was a loud sighing, something I first attributed to the sea but as I listened, seemed apart from it.

Then the rain slowed, the clouds parted, and starlight poured down on me.

I was dazzled, I was stunned, billions of tiny perfect lights glowing at me, as if speaking to me and me alone! I fell to my knees, eyes fixed on the stars above.

There was a deep chuckle, and a splash, and I realized, the clouds had not parted for me to see the stars. They had parted for me to use their light to see something else.

It was a reflection I saw first. Stars reflected in a concave surface, something apart from the mirror of the sea. Then it moved, it rose above me, lifted by a long glittering neck of....scales.

As it spoke, as its mouth moved, all the parts I could not put together formed into a massive head with two huge glittering eyes each as large as my own skull.

"WarSan," She said, in a trilling tone, as if water had spoken, "I am Sharneeshi, the sea serpent. I live in the womb waters of mother Omecka"

I remained on my knees in homage and she laughed, wriggled in the sand, for her form was so large she was almost completely beeched in the shallows, "Hallow me not as a God WarSan, you and your kind are too quick to form allegences to those you would call Gods!" And her long, fin like ears flickered with humour.

I smiled. I found myself liking her very much.

"Sharneeshi," I said, "You are Transcendance"

"Ah!" She exclaimed, like a delighted child, I swear, if she had had hands, she would have clapped. Instead, she wriggled, making spalshes, "You need not the intuition of your Wife, Great Chief. Your knowledge and deduction serve you well enough!"

I frowned, "Chief?"

"Things are coming WarSan," she related to me urgently, "Great and beautiful things. You shall have an important part to play. I am to tell you that my sister comes, She shall come like a blazing star, the saviour, and prophetess, though, all we Dragons are prophets"

"Dragon?' I whispered.

She cocked her head to the side. "Well. I am not a dragon. Not exactly. I am a sea serpent. I have no limbs, no claws, no wings. I need none. I live in Om's womb waters. so I stay, so I remain. I transcend the need for such form. But you shall meet dragons soon enough great chief, very soon. What you see here is Omecka's first night. Soon you shall see Omecka's first day. She turns, she becomes, and in three days time you shall return to the Castle of Goldenstone to meet your destiny. "

"And will I meet you again in this great destiny, oh lovely sea serpent?"

"Perhaps. Your people shall be land dwellers, not fishers, who shall know me well. But if you come to the beach below the Crystal Peaks, you may see me there. I should like to converse with you once destiny is set and sure, Great Chief."

"And I you, lovely Sharneeshi." I reached up a hand, and she placed the immense tip of her nose in my palm. It was hard, and smooth. By the light of the stars I saw her scales patterned blue and green. A part of the sea.

"Until we again meet ...."

"Until we again meet..."

"Walk the way of Om" we said the final in unision.

She flipped, turned, and in a flurry of movement and splashing water, she disappeared.
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The Words of WarSan

November 4th 2009 03:04
I was not born, I was made.

Still, any act of creation may be called birth. Even in this state of being 'made' rather than 'born', I understood myself to be unique in the universe. In my creation came an intense knowledge of Life and the ways of Life. Though I had life, was of it, I knew I was not following its natural path. Like so many things, this knowledge was instinctual.

I was created of Omecka's flesh. The process was excruciating, painful, the feeling of my bones coming true through her rock, my flesh layed down upon them from her earth, and finally, the skin and outer layers formed of her slick, volcanic mud. That is what I was on the day of my creation - a thing of mud, forged from her heat, literally rising through her surface to flail in her hot puddles.

And the first thing I knew as my palms touched her surface was this. She was my mother this planet. She had made me in the same way she herself was made. I knew - She was Emotion. She was feeling. That intangible thing, so subtle, was flesh, and it was beneath me, about me, it was me, as I was made flesh of her flesh.

So I, a man, fully formed, looked about myself, wiping hot mud from my eyes.

I saw others, naked as myself, wallowing in mud, trying to open their eyes. I knew not how to count, but it was a crowd. Man things, woman things, they rubbed at their eyes, desperate to see as they could feel, this thing that had made them. Despite the pain of birth, my first thought was to honour her, pay her homage somehow. After all, I lived, I WAS, and before that, I had not been. She had given me eyes with which to see, hands with which to touch, and in my newly made body I experienced urges and feelings of my own that added to her very density and strength.

My eyes saw only desolation. Nothing but mud and flame and heat, that made me feel discomfort and pain. My first thought was a simple one - to remove the discomfort. So, I stood, away from the flaming magma, and the feeling distilled to the soles of my feet. I was the first to stand, to turn about, and take in my surroundings.

Behind me, as I turned, I saw a structure. Black, in sharp relief from the red sky. It had four high towers on its corners, so high I could not see the tops. Directly before me, at the entrance, stood two figures.

One was male, and one was female. Both were naked as myself and yet they were cleaned of mud. So. They were older than me. By what margin I could not guess. Both stared at me with a direct and knowing gaze - I understood, by being older, they new more than me.

They were the first.

As the planet beneath me was emotion itself birthing into matter, thus these two were the specific emotions of birth. I did not know, specifically, what they embodied, but with my own birth so clear to me, I knew they must be to do with pain. Confusion. It was not for me to figure their purpose - or even my own. If they were first created by the revered HER, then I should serve them.

The woman spoke. "Welcome to Omecka" She said, her voice resonating in me as the most beautiful thing I had thus far experienced. She was as tall as me, her hair was fire, alive, moving, her eyes green, a sharp contrast to the red of the sky, the firey lava in the moat that lay about the castle. The two stood atop a bridge that lay across the lava, allowing entrance to the massive structure.

I wished to look about myself, but would not disrespect her by turning my back. These two were first - hence, they must be Gods. Representatives of Omecka, our mother. We shall serve them, I thought, and it shall be as it should be.

She smiled, as if she heard my thoughts spoken aloud. I felt uncertainty, sharp, stabbing, my first true feeling, and the thought, unbidden, came to mind....Red Witch.....

They turned and walked inside. They did not invite us to join them.

Rain began to fall, and the earth began to cool. The sky began to darken to ruddy orange and the discomfort of heat soon became the discomfort of cold. I turned to survey my companions.

Instantly I saw we were not created equal. There were females - though none as tall and nicely shaped as the red witch - and there were males. I saw, I was the eldest, the strongest, with bulky muscle and weathered hands. These differences enchanted me. I saw how they looked up to me. I realized, as I obey those who are first, these look to me for guidance. We are all the complex manifestations of the emotions of birth, and we will evolve as we may.

I had begun to shiver with cold, and those smaller than me were looking ill, though it was nice to see the mud washing off our skins, and I thought, human, humanoid, we are human. Of all the emotions in the universe, we had been given the shape of those who feel the most, those who have the ability to construct moral, ethic, and reason attached to such emotion.

I felt a massive responsability.

Like a perfect instinct it came to me - we need shelter. Yet there was nothing, my hands itched, knowing what to do, but we were alone on a muddy plain, lit only by the dull light of the lava in the moat, and the only shelter was....The Castle.

The Castle.

As if Omecka herself whispered to me, I understood the Castle had come before the first beings. It was a shrine, a structure, it represented something great and everlasting....The Heart of Life.....But these mysteries were not for me to know.

I looked longingly into the depths of its doorway. But we could not approach. Not without invitation. Those who were first had great power, and I did not. I was merely WarSan, servant and child. They were First, and thus, favoured.

I sat down in the cold wet mud, and the others did the same. Some sat together, sharing warmth. I knew Faith for the first time. We must have Faith, that we were created for purpose, and would fulfill the purpose. I knew the rain would bring change, but would the change be wrought in time to preserve us? The question was a quiet one. I had faith, I could wait.

Before long I knew a new discomfort. Thirst, I had conquered with the sweet water of the rain. But hunger came now, and I knew, to evolve, to grow, we needed to eat. But what? There were no plants growing, no animals living. There was only us.

We waited.

The holy pair came forth. She commanded our eyes - her consort seemed only a pale reflection of her power. And I understood - She was first, He was second. They were unlike us, but what else could be expected? They were first, loved, favoured, we were as nothing to such greatness.

The woman spread long fingered hands. "I am Kalla, First of the first Beings ever to be created on Omecka. This is Lucifer, Second only to me. We are the birth of individual feeling. We are Gods"

Unbidden, aganst my will, I spoke, "I am WarSan, first in the tribe. There is no God but Omecka herself"

The male seemed to snarl at me, the woman narrowed her eyes. "WarSan," she purred, "I am gifted with sight. You are the embodyment of savagery itself. You are an arm of me, part of me. You will do my will."

"We only wish to serve Omecka, she who made us"

"And who made her!" The man roared, such an unbelievable sound from one of such a small frame, short and slight he was, with little flesh on his bones, "She made us, but she did not make herself! Therefore, greater forces than her will work in this universe, and we are connected to those forces! We are here to direct her evolution, thus, to direct YOU!"

I said nothing, but I could feel something from the earth I sat upon. Like a high, desperate keening, and then I understood - what they said was true. Omecka could limit and direct the evolution of her creatures, but she could not control it. We were first, someday, there would be humans who revered us as ancestors, and what would those humans be like?

Once more, I felt great responsability. Strange, that Savagery embodied could have it.

I understood at that moment, such a shock it affected me physically - for me to understand responsability and faith, they must exist here!

And that brought......Curiosity.

I suddenly wanted to know everything about this world and the creatures on it. How big was she, our mother? What did her lands look like? What others were crawling from her muddy soil, her volcanic blood, her molten beating heart?

Kalla spoke. "You are hungry. Birth makes one hungry. We too, are hungry." Her smile was a horrid thing. I realized, despite my decision to revre her, and her obvious beauty, she revolted me.

" Hear now the process of life. Death and Life are part of one another. It is universal law that something must Die so another can live. The next universal law is survival of the fittest. That which acts first lives longest and becomes strongest. I know this because I am First. Follow my creed, and become strong."

She smiled. " I now command you, if hungry, to eat of your brothers and sisters"

No one moved. Her face distorted in fury. "You must LIVE! To live something must die! We are all that exist, the cycle is contained within us! There is no choice!"

I felt her words ripple through the crowd. They had had an impact. She spoke the truth, and some in the group were so newly formed they could not grasp any wrongness in her philosophy. She was first, they would follow.

But still, no one moved.

"Then, as I am first, I shall lead you" Her whisper reached every ear.

She pointed. The youngest, the smallest, a female, was the target of her fingertip. I felt her mesmerisim work the air, and the young thing was standing, walking, tranced, toward the red witch. The consort watched with wide open eyes, almost panting in his haste.

Her mesmerisim worked through the group, and I felt myself bound. I could do nothing but watch. She seemed to understand I would look away if I could. That I was sickened. And it gave her joy to force me to watch - furthermore, it made her stronger, it enhanced her abilities and made her poisonous energy deeper and greater.

As her power grew, thus did the consorts, flowing through her to him, and enhancing both.

I knew horror.

The small female, with hair like white gold and eyes blue as a sky I had never seen, reached the pair.

"I serve you" She whispered. The sacrifice felt no fear, no horror. She accepted that this was the way of Omecka.

I resisted, inside myself, what I felt to be my soul. I felt the great mother support me, as if I were her very hands, but I could not move.

The red witch placed her hands on the childs shoulders. She turned her to face us. Without a word, she placed her mouth at the childs neck......And bit deep. Blood flowed, but only a little, as the witch sucked up the majority into herself.

The consort, Lucifer, leaned forward and bit a chunk out of the childs shoulder. He looked at me as he chewed.

And I knew - The child was Innocence. And they were eating her alive.

Suddenly, I could move, I could act. In the intensity of feeding they had released me. I sprang to my feet, but could not approach them.

"Children of Omecka!" I screamed, "This is not the way!"

Roughly half looked at me with the same cold, hungry eyes of the First pair. I recoiled from them, running, gathering up those who would run with me, who would reject this abomination. I looked back and saw the pack, all of them, feeding on the child, Kalla and Lucifer snarling at the others as they fought for the majority share.

Survival of the fittest. How many would get eaten this day? How long until they were hungry again, and came for us?

Knowing not where, I ran.

And thus, was the birth of the first humans of Omecka.

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Why Yans?

November 2nd 2009 02:12
In dealing with my novel and its planet world, Omecka, you may have noticed that I refer to time spans as Yans instead of Years.

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We know nothing

November 2nd 2009 01:46
The great Lestat once said, that life is meaningless, because, even after death, we shall never know the reason for being alive.


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Update

October 29th 2009 02:34
This will likely be my only post for the week.

Zayfir is improving, slowly. The swelling is going down, nose has stopped bleeding. He seems to be getting back to full health, but I have no doubt that he will suffer headaches throughout his life


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Stallion of Steel

October 22nd 2009 00:53
Well, my boys doing ok.

His nose bled until late last night, and the swelling looks horrific, but I think hes improving. One thought keeps occuring to me - I'm remembering how hard he was galloping, some of the wild jumps I saw. I'm still not exactly clear how he landed on his head, but the one thing I keep thinking is - A lesser horse would have broken. Leg, neck....Something. Mums little Raj, who broke his leg and had to be destroyed at 13 months old, had legs like toothpicks


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Complete, utter, terror

October 19th 2009 07:18
I'm one of those freaks that enjoys scaring themselves. Most scary movies, thrillers, even war movies are comical to me. Violence is not a problem. Movies that actually combine enough suspense to scare me are prized as favourites.

When it comes to personal tragedy, I'm calm. I've lost a few aunties, and a cousin, and was composed at every funeral. When mum suffered her severe back injury, I'm more frustrated by the fact she wont work within her limitations than anything else. I'm even a little jealous - sure, she's in pain, and wicked sick from morphine, but theres a great big finish line waiting for her - nuero surgery. After that, they reakon she'll be good as gold. I have no such finish line waiting for me, just a life of pain and fluctuating symptoms


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Some Poems

October 15th 2009 02:38
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Random Character notes

October 13th 2009 02:37
When drawn, the characters of Andretta and Daemondra seem nothing alike. Andretta is small featured and delicate, raised as a noble in a civilized court. Daemondra was self raised in a savage environment until she was quite literally taken under the wing of Poison, Dragon King. In all aspects Daemondra seems to echo her grandmother, Alexondra. They are both tall and angular with long strong limbs and their bodies are shaped by their warrior ways, with muscled arms and legs and fexible bodies. Their faces are tanned and features hard from many years in 'unpleasant business'. Andretta, though skilled as a warrior and sometimes taking part in battles, is short and gives an impression of soft feminity.

However, it is Andretta who recklessly crosses the Circumference Miridian - something even her mother did not dare to do. She does this purely to be headstrong and go against all advice, and des not realize Omecka let her pass for good reason. It is essential in Oms plan that Andretta reach Divisia. The first being she encounters on its soil - landing in the quater of Wisdom - is Chilon, the Defender of the Light


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Recent Comments

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Why Yans?

November 3rd 2009 00:20
True Dat!

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Plot Outlining

November 2nd 2009 02:18
Hey Dianna,
plots for all of my books have been reworked dozens of times, and after it all, Im still shaky on the beginning of book one!

Did some work on my blog today on my worlds time and seasons.

History for each continent is by far, the most important thing I need to do.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Character Questionnaire Part Two

October 29th 2009 01:22
Hey Dianna,
I just wanted to let you know that these are great and I have been reading along. I just get so busy I dont always have time to tell you! You are really getting my mind ticking over I just havnt had time to get writing. I have started 'random character notes' on my blog (all book stuff goes in writing category) and I really want to get started on history for each continent on my world.

Thanks, these do help.

I admire your goal.

I have chronic migraine, but they often change my diagnosis. I had a fall off a horse when I was 10, and since then Ive had migraine. Im now 27, and earlier this year I was in agony all day every day. They said sinus problems, they said teeth, then they said trigeminal nueralgia. A nuero - my sixth - said it wasnt nueralgia, just 'simply' a form of chronic migraine that has progressed to the point where the cycle is stuck. So I always have one. Instead of going between no pain and pain, I go between less pain and more pain.

I really think we should be able to do better than that.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on What if every word The Bible says.....Is True?

October 19th 2009 21:30
Hi Anon.

Which version?

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Complete, utter, terror

October 19th 2009 21:23
Heya Katyzzz.

As a foal, he was just like his Daddy, always wanting to play. As a stallion, he's like no stallion Ive ever known.

His head is still swollen, nose is bleeding a bit. At least he's not too depressed.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on I lost my Pige

September 24th 2009 00:49
Hi there Niche,
Mine came back, in my other post I talk about it. Landed in the front yrd 3 days later and scurried up to me. He is once again spoiled and fat....And shopping for a lady.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Goodbye Patrick

September 17th 2009 04:09
To my first commenter....

What shall I call you?

I dont always agree with that statement. It can be just as hard to leave as to be left.

Dearest John Doe,

Been awhile!

In my related post I talk a lot more about his impact on the horse world. He had a keen eye for picking good horses and bred for the overall horse rather than show trends and I admire any breeder who can do that. Its my own personal campain so I was happy to share it with him. I barely mentioned his screen fame for that reason.

Seen the end of Battlestar yet? I finished it recently, it did not end like I thought it would! I'm now going to start all over again....

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Excerpt: Eternia Falling

August 18th 2009 23:29
I liked it VERY MUCH!

This is fantastic - your writing is really evolving!

That last one was good alright. Made me laugh on a bad day.

My man is a good one for notes. Occasionally, when he still lived at home, his parents would arrive home to the empty house to find a plastic cup upside down on the floor. On top of cup would be a rock or heavy object. Stuck between cup and rock would be a note.

"Caution. Spider inside"