Kleonaptra

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War and Peace

November 17th 2009 02:20
Heres a little ditty to get you up in the morning.



Warriors:
Praise the winds of chance that blew
Xena back where friends are true
We would fight to death for you, brave Xena
When your mighty chakram arcs
throwing fierce magnetic sparks
No one ever hits her marks like Xena
Famed for prowess with a sword
Who's as feared and as adored
You've not lived till you've been gored by Xena

Warrior #1:
You've the Warrior Princess who's as strong as an oak

Warrior #2:
You've got eyes that can tear out the heart of a bloke

Warrior #3:
With one look you can wilt a flower

Warrior #4:
Curdle milk or make men cower

All Warriors:
Welcome home, Xena, welcome home

Xena:
Ares, I though as much. But why the big production number? What's the point?

Ares:
You are the most divine, delicious warrior
A man can't help saluting your return
And if you start my heart it's just the way you slash and burn
Bewitching woman, straining at the armor plate
You singe me with the ardor you inflame
And in my carnal heart there's not a sorry shred of shame

All Warriors:
You and me love war
Doesn't matter what it's for
Pandemonium reigns and we're bludgeoning brains
Gives us War, War, War
Keep it down to a roar

Warrior #5:
Words of wisdom Ares said

Ares:
When in battle keep your head

All Warriors:
Warriors love War, War, War


Gabrielle:
I know this place. These people. That shop! I’m home. This is Poteidaia!

VILLAGER:
Hey look! It’s Gabrielle!

Villagers:
O'er the Bridge of Tears
She's crossed and she's paid a fearful cost
Her blood innocence is lost, Gabrielle
Now the past has set her free
And she's traveled home to be
With her old friends you and me, Gabrielle

Villager #1:
You've been plucked out from the heart of our lives for long

Villager #2:
Now we're grateful you've come back to place you belong

Villager #3:
For what ails the panacea

Villager #4:
Surely waits in Poteidia

All Villagers:
Welcome home, Gabrielle, welcome home

Gabrielle:
Lila! Sister! I can't believe it.

Lila:
Villains, fools and kings have made their mark on you
Leave their easy evil in the dust
If your child had lived, we'd surely make her welcome, too

All Villagers:
You and me love peace with the ducks and goats and geese
While the hours away baking bread, pitching hay
We love peace, peace, peace, simple joys that never cease

Villager #1:
Nothing changes but the time

Small Group of Villagers:
We don't even change our mind

All Villagers:
Villagers love Peace, Peace, Peace

Ares:
Pulverizing foes requires strategy
There's no mortal horn who meets you skill
Xena join my vision - don't deny your destiny

All Warriors:
You and me love war
Doesn't matter what it's for

Warrior #6:
Chop the tree down, burn the root

Ares:
Vengeance can be such a hoot

All Warriors:
Warriors love War, War, War

Lila:
Xena was no friend, she worked to twist your mind
Though you tried to change her deadly ways
Take the scythe - It's just a case of killing to be kind

All Villagers:
You and me love peace with the ducks and goats and geese

Lila:
Sit and watch the world go by

Villager Couple:
Vegetate until you die

All Villagers:
Villagers love Peace, Peace, Peace

Warriors:
We love War
Villagers:
Peace is such a Lovely state...
War can kill you so you hate

Warriors:
Fear! Lies! Smite and smote and pulverize
Villagers:
Here the simple life's a delight

Warriors:
Pus and Gore
Villagers:
Just you put hand in mine,
sure your future's on the line

Warriors:
You've a son you must avenge,
know you must extract revenge
Villagers:
You must know that when

Warriors:
Don't put aside by beauty,
Xena you must do your duty
Villagers:
Hope died she freed you

All Voices:
Ah ah ah, ah ah ah ah ah...
Ah ah ah, ah ah ah ah ah...
Villagers:
Peace!
Warriors:
War!
Villagers:
Peace!
Warriors:
War!


See it in Xena, season 3 episode, The Bitter Suite.
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Update

November 16th 2009 01:07
Just wanted to let my regular readers know whats happening. I am planning on finishing some old post chains and Im having good ideas for 'savage' that I do intend to get down at some point.

Basically, Im on a night shift every night. So Im tired within the day. And I have horses that should be working - the stallion gets some work but I really need to figure a way to get all the horses done. Got the stallions rego papers on friday and celebrated the great event.


Mums got a hospital date, so soon she'll be going in to see if nuero surgery can fix her. The day to day is hectic enough and I always seem to be tired, so trying to fit in time for my own doctrs appiontment - which I need soon - is slippery.

And unexpected always happens. Take today. I had planned to blog for a bit before I get out and do the horses then off to work, but one of the many cats threw up on the bed and so, Im washing linens.

Just a little bone weary and brain dead, and I dont expect it to lift until at least after christmas. I'll get writing in whenever I can.

Oh, and dont forget, Im a lot more brain dead than usual in the hot months - just cant get creative juices flowin when Im boiling, ok?
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The Words of WarSan (3)

November 6th 2009 03:41
For three days, we waited.

The cave on the beach sheltered us, and on that first morning, as the sky began to lighten, I and the tribe went out on to the beach to watch.

The beach was a tiny thing. It was long, but the strip of sand was barely three paces wide before it met sharp rocks. From beyond the rocks was dark soil, from which large trees were growing, so fast that before the true light came to the sky, they were mammoth.


The dawn twilight took a long time. We were patient. We ate fruit, we held hands, we spoke to each other of the wonder of life.

Always, OmTa and I were hand in hand.

The whole tribe was sitting quietly on the beach when Twisun came into the sky. First, we saw an immense, glittering cloud. Then the edge of a bright sphere, moving, and so suddenly, within breaths, it had risen above Om's circumference, far off to our right, two spheres of pure light, revolving about one another in an incandescant cloud.

In silence, we watched it, filled with awe. It brough light. It brought warmth. By its light, we saw the land rising about us, still bare and brown, but with trees growing. Thus far the only greenery was around the cave mouth.

For three days we ate fruit. We talked, we slept.

In dawn twilight of the fourth day we walked to the castle. It took us some time. We saw the black spires of the towers jutting to the sky, and followed our path towards them.

The castle, when approached, seemed a dreadful place. I could discern no smell, but it seemed repulsive to me, as if it pushed us away. The rock that made it was so black, the lava flowing thickly about its base.

We sat on the dirt, and waited.

Before long Kalla and Lucifer came forth. They stood on the drawbridge. Behind them came their followers. Some were missing, and at their loss I felt a knot of helplessness inside.

We watched each other.

I understood, she wanted to destroy us. She had planned to hunt us. That we had come for her had made her uneasy. She was reluctant to attack. I realized, the beast knew a kind of fear, an uncertainty. Perhaps, that would be the beginning of her downfall.

I had no doubt, the bitch would fall.

At the prescise moment it seemed none of us could wait any longer, Twisun rose from its bed and bathed us in warmth and light. The witch flinched, and her consort covered his eyes. I understood - the light hurt them. One group would have to move.

But before we could a great cry split the air. It seemed to come from everywhere at once, from above, and below, a great exaltant shriek.

I smiled. For the first time, I knew confidence.

From above the spires of the castle a white shining form appeared. Its wings filled the sky, its form glowed, reflecting and absorbing light, so it seemed made of crystal, glittering, shining....


Like a blazing star.

She arrowed towards us, the wind of her flight stirring up dust and mist. She landed between us, the drawbridge and our tribe, slightly to the left of me. OmTa grasped my hand, and I felt her smile match my own.

The form was dragon, and such a dragon! She could have crushed me in her great talon as I could crush a small nut, so great was she. Her face was detailed and beautiful, with huge yellow green eyes and slitted pupils. Her wings were reptilian yet feathered on the ends, great whispering fronds. Her neck and tail weaved with incredible grace. Her scales were each one a different shade of iridiscent white, cream, pale beautous shining coulours from which the light of Twisun glanced and shone.

Her ear flaps were like her sisters, long finlike appendiges at the top of her dragon skull. She had a pair of crystal horns, and between her horns was a crown of shining pearls.

"I am Areyamathea, Queen of Dragons." She spoke, in a voice like music, trilling, deep, resonant. Her reptile eyes fixed upon the frozen form of Kalla.

"You cannot stop me, Curiosity!" Screamed Kalla, all the power of her voice and form dwindling before this great Queen, "I am rage, I am Fear, I am Bloodlust! I am first, and I direct this creation!"

Areyamathea tilted her great head to the side, observing her. "You are split, demoness, in your representation. Because you hold three, and I am only one, I am greater than you. My potency is deeper."

"But you cannot defeat me!" Hissed the witch, "I live in mens hearts and womens souls! I cannot be killed!"

"What you say is true," The dargon smiled, and such a sight that was! "But greater forces than you exist in this universe. There is that which can defeat you, and that is what we witness here today! Behold the Queen of Goldenstone!"

Areyamathea clapped her great front claws together, rearing back on her hind legs to do so. The force of her clap shook each of us, and the red witch looked fearfully into the moat by her side, which had begun to bubble.

I realized then, that we are slaves to our human shape. Though we represent and embody specific emotions, we were each creatures capable of experiencing the full spectrum. Even her, the witch.

The bubbles in the lava grew larger, and all eyes were locked on to that place. The lava sighed, heat, mist, was released.......And from the very lava rose the shape of a woman. She came fast, in only a breath she was there, fully formed, feet hovering above the lava. The rivers of red ran off her skin until she hung there clean and white with skin as pale as the stars themselves. Her long hair swirled over her shoulders, thick to her waist and black as night. Her eyes opened, and they were blue as the sea. As the final drops of lava red fell from her feet, the moat turned blue as her eyes, a sudden flash of colour that raced around the base of the castle.

Smiling, the woman spread her hand and floated through the air until she hung above the earth. She reached down with a dainty toe and placed both feet upon the earth.

Something screamed - every cell on Om's skin shrieked in exaltation. Areyamathea had her great eyes closed, claws digging gently into the soil. As the womans feet touched the soil, a great flood of green grass sprang from the earth and flew across her surface like fire. Suddenly everything was green, so many shades of it, up in the trees, in bushes and grasses, and beautiful blue and purple flowers sprang up around her feet, trailing away from her in joyous tendrils.

"I am Xiara!" She cried, "I am the Queen of Goldenstone!"

At her words the walls of the castle seemed to crack, the black skin flaking off, crumbling, falling into the moat to be swallowed by its purity. Underneath the walls were pure, pearlescant gray of clouds, some shot through with ivory viens. Every fifth stone was a pale gold.

Lucifer was on his knees, weeping. Those who followed them were all confused, some looking at us, others at Xiara and Areyamathea, and there were those who kept their cold hard eyes on their queen, Kalla.

Kalla stood straight and true, taller than Xiara, staring at her enemy. The two faced one another.

"You." Spat Kalla, "You are Choice"

Xiara assented with a tilt of her head. "I am choice. I am its form. My presecence enables those without great will to choose......For you. Or against you. Feel their hearts, Kalla. Feel their souls. They do not choose you."

Kallas green eyes narrowed, "It matters not! I cannot be killed! Rule if you will Queen of nothing! I shall remain, with my consort and my followers, and know that while I live I shall gather strength to move against you! Ours is the way, we are the stronger, and your kingdom of peace shall fall to me!"

Areyemathea spoke, "That cannot be allowed to come to pass"

Kalla looked at her in horror and shock, finally sensing that events were fully out of her control. Areyemathea gathered herself and let forth a burst of green dragon flame from her mouth and nostrils. Kalla and her followers dived for cover, out of the way.

The flames had engulfed, obliterated, the form of Lucifer.

On her knees, Kalla screamed, "He cannot be killed! What have you done with him!"

"His form is no more," Areyamathea said. "He resides in Om's molten core, safe, protected. From there he may whisper, but he shall not have physical form again." Her eyes fixed upon the witch.

Kala reached out, grabbed one of her followers. This ones eyes had cleared upon seeing the dragon and the queen, and now looked terrified. This was one who had not known there was choice.

Kalla placed a splayed hand of sharp edged nails on the womans belly. I saw something red pass down her arm, from hand to womb. Defiantly, Kalla faced the Dragon.

"Destroy me then! Take my form! But know this - into this innocent woman I have placed a babe. It shall wear my face and have my form. From this curse, I tell you now, into every generation my body shall live. Into every generation there shall be those who choose to worship me! If they desire, they can call my soul into the form that was once mine. This shall be called The Cult of Lucifer, in honour of those emotions that are truly strong, that truly rule the world and direct the universe! So destroy my body you may, but I can never be destroyed!"

She faced the dragon, looking straight into its eyes.

Areyemathea engulfed the witch in flames. To my horror, the witch laughed as she was burned to ashes.

Those who had remained true to her, perhaps eight of them, ran into the newly made forest. One, a female, stopped, turned, looked at the one who was now pregnant with the witch's body. She looked long, to affirm she could not forget the face, and then followed her breathren.

"WarSan," said the dragon, "I have a task for you."

"Anything, Great One"

"I am prophetess, I am Saviour. Omecka herself has beseeched me to give you this great task. This mistake shall not ever be repeated. Some of her peoples must ever be set apart from the rest of life. You are to choose ten males, ten females, and travel south west into the high crags of the Wolf Mountains. Life will be hard, but Om and your faith in her shall serve you. "

I stood. "As you will it, great one." I gestured with my hand, and OmTa and a crowd stood. I did not need to choose them, now that Xiara was here, they were able to choose for themselves. They began to walk south west, knowing the journey was to be a long one. I looked at Areyemathea for the final time.

"One more thing, WarSan." The dragon whispered, "Om would not have you worship her. You shall revre her, if you wish, and give her homage, but she shall not be your God. You shall worship the first animals to walk her soil"

From behind me, I heard small footsteps.

I turned, and racing towards us were great, large, furry creatures. Patterned white, black, grey, with long snouts, four paws and high fluffy tails. They raced past me, through my tribe, to race ahead and leave us a path of paw prints to follow.

The last one, the largest, stopped and threw her paws on my chest, panting into my face. Each paw was easily the size of my chest muscles. She barked once, and chased after the pack.

"Wolf" I whispered, the word rising unbidden to my lips.

"And you shall be the Wolfen" Said Xiara, " Apart from all clans and tribes, alone in your worship of The Mighty Wolf Pack"

"So shall it be" I whispered.

OmTa beakoned, "Come husband!" And I followed, turning my back on the dragon, the Queen, and the peoples left behind.

These are the words of WarSan.

This is the stroy, as it is told by each Great Chief, passed down generation by generation.

These are the Words of WarSan as spoken my me, Om-Ra, the seventh Great Chief of the Wolfen Tribe.
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The Words of WarSan (2)

November 5th 2009 01:54
So we ran.

All of the earth looked the same, through the rain, there seemed no direction, no place to run to. The sky had darked and it seemed as if the air itself had turned to shadow. I felt as if we were cursed, created to be devoured, chased, hunted. As if the darkness conspired with Kalla and all was bent under her will


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The Words of WarSan

November 4th 2009 03:04
I was not born, I was made.

Still, any act of creation may be called birth. Even in this state of being 'made' rather than 'born', I understood myself to be unique in the universe. In my creation came an intense knowledge of Life and the ways of Life. Though I had life, was of it, I knew I was not following its natural path. Like so many things, this knowledge was instinctual


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Why Yans?

November 2nd 2009 02:12
In dealing with my novel and its planet world, Omecka, you may have noticed that I refer to time spans as Yans instead of Years.

Why


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We know nothing

November 2nd 2009 01:46
The great Lestat once said, that life is meaningless, because, even after death, we shall never know the reason for being alive.


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Update

October 29th 2009 02:34
This will likely be my only post for the week.

Zayfir is improving, slowly. The swelling is going down, nose has stopped bleeding. He seems to be getting back to full health, but I have no doubt that he will suffer headaches throughout his life


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Stallion of Steel

October 22nd 2009 00:53
Well, my boys doing ok.

His nose bled until late last night, and the swelling looks horrific, but I think hes improving. One thought keeps occuring to me - I'm remembering how hard he was galloping, some of the wild jumps I saw. I'm still not exactly clear how he landed on his head, but the one thing I keep thinking is - A lesser horse would have broken. Leg, neck....Something. Mums little Raj, who broke his leg and had to be destroyed at 13 months old, had legs like toothpicks


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Complete, utter, terror

October 19th 2009 07:18
I'm one of those freaks that enjoys scaring themselves. Most scary movies, thrillers, even war movies are comical to me. Violence is not a problem. Movies that actually combine enough suspense to scare me are prized as favourites.

When it comes to personal tragedy, I'm calm. I've lost a few aunties, and a cousin, and was composed at every funeral. When mum suffered her severe back injury, I'm more frustrated by the fact she wont work within her limitations than anything else. I'm even a little jealous - sure, she's in pain, and wicked sick from morphine, but theres a great big finish line waiting for her - nuero surgery. After that, they reakon she'll be good as gold. I have no such finish line waiting for me, just a life of pain and fluctuating symptoms


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Recent Comments

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Why Yans?

November 3rd 2009 00:20
True Dat!

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Plot Outlining

November 2nd 2009 02:18
Hey Dianna,
plots for all of my books have been reworked dozens of times, and after it all, Im still shaky on the beginning of book one!

Did some work on my blog today on my worlds time and seasons.

History for each continent is by far, the most important thing I need to do.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Character Questionnaire Part Two

October 29th 2009 01:22
Hey Dianna,
I just wanted to let you know that these are great and I have been reading along. I just get so busy I dont always have time to tell you! You are really getting my mind ticking over I just havnt had time to get writing. I have started 'random character notes' on my blog (all book stuff goes in writing category) and I really want to get started on history for each continent on my world.

Thanks, these do help.

I admire your goal.

I have chronic migraine, but they often change my diagnosis. I had a fall off a horse when I was 10, and since then Ive had migraine. Im now 27, and earlier this year I was in agony all day every day. They said sinus problems, they said teeth, then they said trigeminal nueralgia. A nuero - my sixth - said it wasnt nueralgia, just 'simply' a form of chronic migraine that has progressed to the point where the cycle is stuck. So I always have one. Instead of going between no pain and pain, I go between less pain and more pain.

I really think we should be able to do better than that.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on What if every word The Bible says.....Is True?

October 19th 2009 21:30
Hi Anon.

Which version?

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Complete, utter, terror

October 19th 2009 21:23
Heya Katyzzz.

As a foal, he was just like his Daddy, always wanting to play. As a stallion, he's like no stallion Ive ever known.

His head is still swollen, nose is bleeding a bit. At least he's not too depressed.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on I lost my Pige

September 24th 2009 00:49
Hi there Niche,
Mine came back, in my other post I talk about it. Landed in the front yrd 3 days later and scurried up to me. He is once again spoiled and fat....And shopping for a lady.

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Goodbye Patrick

September 17th 2009 04:09
To my first commenter....

What shall I call you?

I dont always agree with that statement. It can be just as hard to leave as to be left.

Dearest John Doe,

Been awhile!

In my related post I talk a lot more about his impact on the horse world. He had a keen eye for picking good horses and bred for the overall horse rather than show trends and I admire any breeder who can do that. Its my own personal campain so I was happy to share it with him. I barely mentioned his screen fame for that reason.

Seen the end of Battlestar yet? I finished it recently, it did not end like I thought it would! I'm now going to start all over again....

Comment by Kleonaptra
on Excerpt: Eternia Falling

August 18th 2009 23:29
I liked it VERY MUCH!

This is fantastic - your writing is really evolving!

That last one was good alright. Made me laugh on a bad day.

My man is a good one for notes. Occasionally, when he still lived at home, his parents would arrive home to the empty house to find a plastic cup upside down on the floor. On top of cup would be a rock or heavy object. Stuck between cup and rock would be a note.

"Caution. Spider inside"