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A Sci-Fi tale - Part II

March 11th 2008 07:59
Rain sheeted down in the distance, giving the horizon a dark blue-grey hue, which seemed to reflect the ominous nature of what lay ahead. The storm front appeared to be heading in his direction, from the west and across the battlefield, evidenced by a light spattering tickling his coarse features.
‘Vile rain.’ he murmured as his mind centered itself on the matter at hand.
‘To what purpose does it serve but to cause me more inconvenience in dealing with this filth ridden hive.’
Valedictus surveyed his troops. The deployment of his forces had gone to perfection, ably assisted by his support staff, who followed his orders to the letter. Victory is assured he thought, idly musing to himself. The enemy stands no chance and his indomitable iron will shall see them crushed utterly. In fact, he thought, he could just watch. He felt he would not even need to take the field, perhaps even leave it to Benedict. That would give his apprentice an opportunity to prove his worth.

‘Sergeant,’ he shouted, gesturing to the Blood Angel seconded to him, ‘take your men to the western fringe, I have need of them there. Prepare to mobilize!’
‘At your command, ‘Sergeant Damocles responded plainly, ‘Brothers, with me!’ He ordered his company to move out to the west, his squad of assault marines trudging behind him.

The Blood Angel Sergeant did not like this, his place was alongside his battle brothers, in the thick of the coming battle, not skulking around away from the front, watching and avoiding the fight. Not to mention taking orders from some mere human. Damocles had some respect for the work of the Inquisition, maintaining order and keeping vigil over the sanctity of the emperor's domain, keeping it pure and traitor free, however he was a Space Marine. He was as a god amongst mortal men, genetically enhanced and rigorously trained. Provided with the best equipment that the Imperium could provide, armed with holy boltgun and blessed chainsword. He would follow one of his chapter masters into the pit of hell itself, but this Inquisitor Valedictus was a conundrum. He found it difficult to determine whether there was a shred of nobility in the man. Even though he seemed to wield significant power, he appeared to care little for his subordinates and allies. But obey him he must, even it it means avoiding the battle.


Little did he know however that he and the battle brothers under his command would become more a part of the battle to come than he could have ever foreseen.
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A sci-fi tale, Part I

March 6th 2008 01:00
...Whispers in the dark, at the edges of his perception beckoned to him. Allusions of great power, divine providence and the secret to salvation seemed not only possible but also, actually attainable. Dark secrets were whispering, promising the means to an end, giving him ultimate victory and unrivaled power. All he had to do was embrace the rage...

Valedictus shook himself out of his momentary reverie. That was very unlike him, his normally controlled subconscious did not idly wander like that. His brief mental contemplation and meditation was supposed to be calming, not...whatever that was. He brushed it off as nothing more than the slightest case of jitters he got before every battle, especially after the encounter with the daemon. By the Emperor, that otherworldly creature was strong. If it had not been for that foolhardy yet brave young apprentice, Acolyte Helmut, distracting it he might never have been able to unleash his most potent ability upon it. Helmut had died of course, eviscerated by the monstrous claws of the fiend, but such is the life, and death, of a servant of the Inquisition. Valedictus had sent the beast mewling back to the warp with his mind, a psychic blast the ferocity of which at first surprised him, and left him feeling mentally drained. He dared not repeat such an encounter yet. Whilst he had the utmost faith in his ability, his troops and in the Emperor, he had known himself to experience flashes of doubt on occasion after that encounter. A moment’s hesitation is all that separates the living and the dead. Yet another thing to overcome, he thought, an Inquisitor’s work is never complete.

He knew that this cult was a pitiful rebellion, largely perpetrated by one heretical preacher, no doubt obsessed with his own rise to power, and the false promises of the dark powers. However, he could not banish the possibility that they could bring about the appearance of a fell creature from the warp. He could taste a tang in the air, a subtle hint of dark magic at work.
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The state of the Internet.

February 28th 2008 05:36
Joseph Licklider was really onto something when, while exploring his interest in information technology, he concocted the idea of linking the world through computers and enabling people to share information and ideas.

I wonder if he imagined at all, the overall potential of the internet, and whether he could have predicted what it has become today. I wonder if, when he learned about psychology, whether or not he reckoned on the slightly darker and less appreciative of the human psyche when it is handed anonymity and a global audience. How ironic that i write this now, and in this format...

I have found the internet to be a vast source of useful (and sometimes useless) information and ideas with many people across the globe, giving them the tools to engage, regardless of background, in positive constructive thought and discussion within a forum that doesn't outright ignore them from the get go. Everyone who writes something feels that they will be heard, even if it is by only a few.

However, in some areas it has also become a seething pot of condescending behavior, assumed superiority and downright derogatory comment from people experiencing a freedom of expression that has no discernible consequence.

Obviously the internet itself is not to blame, but people themselves, taking advantage of a situation. If something can be exploited, it will. At least that is what seems to be the case, an inherent maliciousness exhibited by people, who feel they are existing in a position of authority or power, by wielding their words like a club.
Although, comparatively speaking, is it that big a deal. 10 people may read this, but only 1 or 2 might comment.

Is it just a case of the squeakiest wheel getting the attention?




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