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There are as many nights as days, and the one is just as long as the other in the year's course. Even a happy life cannot be without a measure of darkness, and the word 'happy' would lose its meaning if it were not balanced by sadness - Carl Jung To be at one with God is to be at peace ... peace is to be found only within, and unless one finds it there he will never find it at all. Peace lies not in the external world. It lies within one's own soul. - Ralph Waldo Trine

Invisible People

Once there was this girl. She looked like everyone else, felt like everyone else, ate, drank and slept like everyone else. She was born into a family who had done nothing particularly important in the world, nor anything particularly bad. They were a normal group of folk who carried on their lives like most, living each day in their monotonous way, complying with their societal roles handed down generation after generation.

Yet somehow, over the years this girl slowly transformed into one of those invisible people, the kind that are there, but almost always overlooked and never actually seen. The world had showered its misfortunes down on her, words had pounded heavily on her shoulders like a giant jack-hammer, continually bashing her further into the ground as she struggled to find her place, slot into her little niche and make something of herself. Eventually she just became invisible so as to try and steer clear of the rat race.



From this viewpoint the world took on a totally different perspective. She started to see everything from rainbow coloured eyes, absorbing it all in through every sense that was now tingling, heightened, opened. No longer would she allow those words to pound her, she grabbed each leg and pulled it out of the stagnant ground into which they had sunk. No longer would she listen to the words, analyse their tone and create pictures of the jaggered knives in her back. Instead she grabbed onto their jewel-encrusted handles and pulled them free, tossing them in the air and watching their blades spark as they bounced off the stony ground, left behind.

She realised that the world was filled with invisible people who kept to the shadows. She would walk past them in the street, exchanging knowing looks and seeing joy in eyes that knew. That felt. That saw it all and understood without having to say a word. It was a strange world to be a part of, but not be a part of. To be alone but accepted and befriended by other invisible people. To communicate with thoughts instead of words.


To be invisible was to finally be free.
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1. November 12th 2007 @ 00:57. What's Your Story? Says:
Oh Ash, this piece is so moving. so beautiful.

you took my breath away.

It connected deeply with me. To be invisible was a fear for me at first, then it became a comfort zone, then a bond that I discovered I shared with others too. Very similar to the girl in your post. We invisible people find inspiration in one another, perhaps it is fellow invisibles who hear our voices first and hence give us the courage to shine, be heard and eventually, be seen.
2. November 12th 2007 @ 01:21. Kleonaptra Says:
Oh, Ash!
This is utterly brilliant. I love it so much....
3. November 12th 2007 @ 01:41. katyzzz Says:
Ash, I am an optomist, rainbows can lead elsewhere. Life is real, enjoy it.
4. November 12th 2007 @ 03:05. Tracy Says:
Hello Ash

I needed to hear something like this today. Thank-you,

Tracy
5. November 12th 2007 @ 04:57. Lilla Says:
Ash,

Flitting in and out of the shadows, leaving only the few points of my passing....

..and hopefully some warmth of my appreciation.

Lilla ...
6. November 12th 2007 @ 05:33. Lara M Says:
Love this Ash...and can totally relate...

To be invisible can be pretty *powerful*...it's seeing beyond the seeing...

p/s...love the new banner pix too!
7. November 12th 2007 @ 06:49. Justicia Says:
That was beautiful, thanks for sharing. I can definitely relate to it!
8. November 12th 2007 @ 08:38. Krystal Says:
It is beautiful, but it's very sad.
9. November 12th 2007 @ 08:46. Tracy Says:
I think this is one of those pieces I will keep returning to...especially the part:

To be invisible was to finally be free.

Beautiful, Ash.

10. November 12th 2007 @ 22:16. Ash Says:
Hi Toni

It is true what you have said - I think invisible people shine in their silent ways more than the loud and vocal ones which we are sometimes surrounded by.

Thanks for your thoughts and I`m happy to read you have found your comfort zone

Ash
11. November 12th 2007 @ 22:17. Ash Says:
Thanks K

Rock on invisible people of the world

Ash
12. November 12th 2007 @ 22:19. Ash Says:
Hi Katyzzz

This was intended to be an optomistic piece - about people finding their niche and a place where they could really live instead of trying to compete in a world in which they felt ostracized.

Ash
13. November 12th 2007 @ 22:20. Ash Says:
Many thanks Trace

I am honoured that you would keep coming back I like it when I can say something that sits well with another... if you can make even only person feel like what they think is OK then I reckon that makes that day worthwhile. So thank you for reading

Ash
14. November 12th 2007 @ 22:21. Ash Says:
Warmth felt

Thanks Lilla, those new wings looks wonderful

Ash
15. November 12th 2007 @ 22:23. Ash Says:
Hi Lara

This is very true

To be invisible can be pretty *powerful*...it's seeing beyond the seeing...

I love that! Thanks for coming on by

ash
16. November 12th 2007 @ 22:25. Ash Says:
Welcome Justicia

It is great to meet you, thanks for coming by. Happy to hear you can relate - seems there are so many invisible people out there

Ash
17. November 12th 2007 @ 22:26. Ash Says:
Hi Krystal

Thank you. Sorry you found it to be sad, it wasn`t the intended message. In fact quite the opposite.

But it`s good that people read things in different ways and have different perspectives. That`s what makes life interesting!

Ash
18. November 14th 2007 @ 03:56. Miswanderlust Says:
Ash
WONDERFUL!
Mis
19. November 23rd 2007 @ 02:04. Ash Says:
Thanks Mis

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