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In the silence A moment stays

August 26th 2007 06:34
In the silence of your silence,
The moment when you went quiet,
That last word, lost, somewhere, in time.
A droplet flowers; I heard you.

The ancients have built a temple,
For you, to capture that moment,
On the thought of a tear falling
In the quiet space, in-between

The columns – reaching for heavens
Holding the blue sky, bringing light

Into the mortal life, of man,
Reaching, on a stool, for the stars.

Now I can say between your words,
Where flowers flower: I heard you.

I have read the classics of thought,
I have written the thoughts of books,
I have thought the song of poets,
And, through the ages, have I lived.

I have listened to music’s song,
I have seen angels sing cello,
I have sung the thought of poets,
And, through the ages, have I lived.

I have felt gold godly sculpted,
I have seen gods with sculpted gold,
I have sculpted the thought of poets,
And, through the ages, have I lived.

I have lived, through the ages, life,
I have lived the thought of poets,
I have seen, in traces, beauty, truth,
And they search, and they talk, of you.

Holderlin’s space; rose petal's grace,
Glory of glorious glory,
Michaelangelo’s starry night;
You have changed the meaning of truth.

You unveil, reveal, and let,
As truth follows; crafts golden steps
After every breath that you take;
Art becomes, as you, after you.

Your grace recalls all royalty
And heavens and their loyalty
To genuflect your sacred walk
To bear in silence and not talk.

Silence…
You let…
A tear…
I hear…

My heart I hold beats stronger in your hands,
Made of earth’s rich clay, washed in heaven’s lakes:
I breathe; breaths breathe breaths, held; you have my heart
And I a look, sweet, at the art god makes.

One tear… Just one tear and the world changes
And the blue sky blues and the sun shines sun
And behind them both dreams unfold dreamers
By rivers of gold reflecting the sun.

I think about you when you are not here,
I become elsewhere thinking about you,
While you are not here I think about you
When I will be close becoming with you.

Truth flowers in your steps and in your light.
My heart beats by your side and in your sight.

Silence…
You let…
I hear…
A tear…

In your temple, in your silence,
In your heartbeat softly breathing,
Poets stop. A droplet flowers.
A flower is born. I hear you.

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Comment by Tracy

August 26th 2007 22:17
Beautiful...

Comment by isa

August 29th 2007 17:05
I feel with this particular 'poem' you seem to be reaching for words, nice extravagant words that shoudl only be used in a poem. When i read this poem i think are you for real??? I also think, idealistic and i think, god-i must be so critical or am i just realistic. Are you writing this as an experience because you are pretty lucky to experience this stuff. But more i read it and think this guy is plucking words here. The words are divine yet surreal and mystical but also classical of poetry, something i mite have read before somewhere.... maybe not so original, although it is original it is also common if you get what i mean by common poetry. Sorry-just my thoughts. Happy days!!!

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