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From The Heart - by Achilliez_Heel

I will never forget...

May 15th 2007 04:20
I will never forget the day I met her. She that seemed so perfect, I don’t speak of physical attraction, no this was more, more than I could have wanted, this was love. Love… many want it but less know it, truly understand what it is to be in love. A wonderful feeling that takes you so high, just high enough to fall far. But the feeling… indescribable, but I’ll try. More than sexual, sensual... satisfying all the senses. tingling. Overwhelming. Happiness. Unbelievable. The well known butterflies, but then the less known feeling, like a breath of fresh air. Suddenly you’re flying, soaring, you just want to see them, talk to them, and know how they’re doing. That’s how she was; we talked about any thing not to pass information but just to be together, just to hear each others voices. She was perfect; her smile her personality, her lips, so soft I never wanted to leave her. Oh how it was heaven yet just bordering hell. Because flying so high it’s a long way to fall. The minutes were gone; the hours wasted, the days leaving, and the week’s barley holding on, I smiled an empty smile now that I saw her knowing we would soon be parted…………………………… …………

…………….but now she’s gone and I can’t stop the heartache, so I write, I can’t seem to sleep so I don’t. I feel crushed, a broken soul, no longer use to anyone but yet I persist, id do it all again but I can’t so I’ll try to find someone else, secretly hoping she’ll come back into my life. Because once you've taken the poison of love you need it. Because I will never forget her, and I will never forget the day I met her.
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Comment by Ash

May 15th 2007 05:51

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May 16th 2007 03:04
I want to know what everone thinks...
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