For Lily...
We sat...
on a summer night
the warm air
touching my skin
his energy warming
my soul
he looked at me...
in the darkness
his eyes
searching my body
our breathing deep
becoming one
intoxicating...
life
in its calloused
weary way
had brought us together
love
the forbibben kind
had hid us
in the shadows
protection
had wrapped
its arms around us...
it was meant to be....
the beauty of him
left me breathless
his words filled my mind
his face was behind
every blink of
my eye
admiration lingered
its tongue gently
caressing
outlining
searching....
aaahhhhh
.....feeling
Life...
Love...
Protection...
Beauty...
Admiration...
All were him
All were me
All was...
us....
on a summer night
the warm air
touching my skin
his energy warming
my soul
he looked at me...
in the darkness
his eyes
searching my body
our breathing deep
becoming one
intoxicating...
life
in its calloused
weary way
had brought us together
love
the forbibben kind
had hid us
in the shadows
protection
had wrapped
its arms around us...
it was meant to be....
the beauty of him
left me breathless
his words filled my mind
his face was behind
every blink of
my eye
admiration lingered
its tongue gently
caressing
outlining
searching....
aaahhhhh
.....feeling
Life...
Love...
Protection...
Beauty...
Admiration...
All were him
All were me
All was...
us....
*As per your request Lily...I hope it meets your standards...apologies for it being slapped down , I may give it another try tomorrow on a clearer head....













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Flashes of memories
reflection on this one today...not too happy with the results....late nights and all.....too good a jumble of words
Ars Poetica
in its calloused
weary way
had brought us together
love
this jumble of words?
ya did good gerl ... love the artwork too
weekend lovin' to ya..
~Lily
Flashes of memories
ah the clouds are so beautiful today - if it weren`t fer the damn ants on the grass i`d be out there contemplating new jumbles of words. one just stung my toe....I need a hammock me thinks.
*reading 'Handwriting' - poems by Michael Ondaatje.....ah I highly recommend it*
We should make this poetry writing thing a regular - Sunday afternoon affair - good to get the creative juices flowing....
glad you liked this one, not entirely happy with it though...maybe more later...head a little heavy today....
Ars Poetica
Ants.. i stood out on my porch last week, looking for the comet.. and along came a bull-ant who nipped me on the toe. i howled and hopped and my daughter hid (lol). Haven't been bitten by one of those since i was a youngun'.. HURT dun they???? .. a hammock, a wonderful idea.... star gaze from the hammock...
well i've slept all day and i doubt i'll be able to get the Muse up... so i'll be reading tonight me thinks...
unless i get a flash of memory or something....
~Lily
Flashes of memories
ahhh sleep....I only managed 3 hours last night...today I pay the price of a late night with the knowledge of an early morning start....ug! thank goodness for Sundays
I've been working on a new one along the lines of your words you gave...perhaps post it up later tonight....
enjoy your reading and *flashing* in a non-pervert sort of way
Ars Poetica
looking forward to your new musings dearheart.. yay
ugh 3 hours sleep.. i would be garbling..
lol@flashing
~Lily
Flashes of memories