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Feeling Traped

February 9th 2008 23:01
i close my eyes and this is what i see
a young girl traped in side an empty room
with only a window
as she glares out at the world
she wish that she could go out and join in
but shes traped in this cold room with only a window
why has she been placed here
she crys every day
looking for a way out
but there is no door
as she glares out her window
she sees the world she longs to join
as her tears are falling
she finaly realises why she has been put here
she is traping herself

seeing a room with only a window
because that is how she feels
but as i open my eyes
this is what i see
a young girl who has
traped her self in a life
filled with with regret
filled with pain
and she has traped her self
because she has lost hope
to go out and join the world she longs to be in
a girl that crys everyday with regret
a girl that is lost and alone
a girl who is not traped in a room
but traped in the past
she doesnt know how to let go
she cant move on
to busy wishing on what shouldnt of happend
this girl is young and should be able to join the world
and wish on what could happen
this girl is sorry for what she has done
and is looking for the door to forgiveness
but nobody will hand her key
this girl is being forced to live in the past
as nobody will let her have a life
of happyness or love
if you where this girl
and every one turned there back on you
how would you feel
would you cry every day
looking for someone to give you a second chance
would you lock yourself away
this yong girl is lost and needs help

this young girl is me
and i long to be free
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Comment by linzi

February 11th 2008 18:51
oh dear, this sounds bad. i hope you are ok. you sound like you have been addicted to something,and your at a place of rest. or you could be in a prison. the good thing is that you are getting it out on this computer. thats, a good start. you sound very depressed. i also feel trapped, but this is because i live away from home. i have a family of my own which is great but im fucking isolated.and the social scene is zilch . i was a party animal in the past, its still there. i really dont want ramble on about me. i hope you will be forgiven for what you have done. other people are not helping you .maybe it will take time. good luck honey, i hope this comment gives you a buzz, its always nice to get one even though you dread opening it in case its bad. cheer up and keep crying get it out there will be a time when the tears will stop eventually good luck.

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