Kerryn WoodDavid Dreamscape Part Two
June 7th 2007 12:49
David Next Door Part 2
His kiss was mind-blowing, euphoric, delightful, delicious. His lips were soft, supple, warm, wet. His hands held my arms aloft, pinned to the back of the door. His body he pushed firmly up against my own. His kiss the most sensual I’ve ever experienced; his lips the softest I’d ever felt; his grip strong, his body warm. I was sinking at the knees.
As if aware of my failing limbs, he slowly withdrew his mouth from my own. Seconds later I finally opened my eyes, they locked instantly onto his. He was still only inches away from my face, but his eyes stared back into mine. Neither of us spoke, and the longer the silence, the longer we knew what the other were thinking.
He released his grip from my arms, and I dropped them to my side. He broke slightly away from my now heaving chest, a hand reached up and brushed a strand of hair out of my face. I blushed. My knees went weak again.
“Let’s go to your room,” David suggested, and I nodded, taking his hand, and leading him down the hall. Before we got to the bedroom door, David pulled on my hand forcing me to stop before bumping into me. We both laughed.
He pushed me up against the wall again, he was firm, strong, in control but gentle. He put his face close to mine, he was breathing me in. I watched him, hearing only the sound of our breathing coming on heavier with each moment. I went to move my arms up to embrace him, but he took control again.
He took my hands in his own, and held them down at my side. He pushed his hard and warm body up against mine again, up against my breasts. He groaned. His mouth found that delicious spot on my neck, and began kissing me, my head fell languidly to the side, inviting him in for me.
He eased a leg in between the two of mine, and slowly brought his knee to up meet my crotch. He pressed against me, more firmly than before, his teeth now finding my neck, his hands gripping me tight: I cried out in pure ecstasy.
Where was this guy taking me? I’d never felt so much fire, so much passion. His obvious persistent need for me, fuelled my ravishing need for him. I wanted him now, needed him now, had to have him, but he was going to make me wait. His slow, delightful and delicate seduction was turning my tummy over and my world upside down. The waiting was turning my limbs to jelly and my mind to custard: what a sweet, sweet dessert I would make for him tonight.
He moved his mouth from my neck as he planted little kisses on my cheek, my nose, one eyelid, and then the other, before he found my mouth. But he teased: he placed his lips over the top of mine and breathed into me, he didn’t kiss me. I tried to kiss him, but he withdrew - he was a master, perhaps the master. I had to play his game, he was only going to give as much of himself to me as he wanted, so we were playing by his rules. I was happy to do that, so long as his game increased in pace soon. I had a fever burning between my legs and a fire inside my chest. I needed him, and I needed release.
He played with my lips, running his tongue slowly over them. First over the bottom, and then across the top. I closed my eyes so I could concentrate only on his feel, his smell, his sweet breath, his beating heart. Suddenly he kissed me full on my open mouth. I wasn’t expecting it - and that’s the precise moment he was waiting for. He wanted to lull me into a false sense of security before shocking me onto another plateau. He succeeded.
While he kissed me again with those warm tender succulent lips, his knee pushed harder into my groin, massaging me with his touch. His grip tightened on my own hands, I squeezed back. I arched my back and pressed my breasts into him and tried to kiss him back - but he was still in control.
We kissed for what seemed an eternity. I became lost in him. He transported me to another universe where only we existed, and time ceased to. I’d never understood the phrase about ‘two becoming one’ until right then. There was no him and I, there was only ‘us’.
As if reading my mind, David suddenly broke away from me. He let go of me and collapsed back on the wall behind him. He was breathing heavy, his eyes sparkling, his arousal evident. I was sure I could hear his heart beating, almost see it popping out from his chest. He ran his hands through his hair as he looked at me, and smiled.
“This is intense” he finally said.
When I regained my breath enough to speak, I answered, “Yes, yes it is.” I laughed, stayed against my side of the wall.
“Are you okay?” I asked, suddenly becoming worried that he had just
changed his mind.
He smiled, and then laughed a little chuckle, “Oh yeah, I’m just great!” he
laughed again, “I just didn’t realise, I didn’t think, I …..” he stammered, shifted feet, ran his hands through his hair again.
He looked up at me, I realised he had deep alluring brown eyes, and I melted. “It’s just, I’ve never felt like this with anyone before, I mean, I‘ve never felt so, so……so free, so right, so damned hot!”
I laughed. “I know, it’s crazy isn’t it, I feel the same way!”
“You do?” he seemed surprised.
“Yeah!!!! Can’t you tell?”
He laughed. And stared at me again. I stared back. He kept staring and soon I began to feel embarrassed by his attention. He sensed it, and walked toward me.
“Come with me,” he motioned, took my hand, and entered my room.
His kiss was mind-blowing, euphoric, delightful, delicious. His lips were soft, supple, warm, wet. His hands held my arms aloft, pinned to the back of the door. His body he pushed firmly up against my own. His kiss the most sensual I’ve ever experienced; his lips the softest I’d ever felt; his grip strong, his body warm. I was sinking at the knees.
As if aware of my failing limbs, he slowly withdrew his mouth from my own. Seconds later I finally opened my eyes, they locked instantly onto his. He was still only inches away from my face, but his eyes stared back into mine. Neither of us spoke, and the longer the silence, the longer we knew what the other were thinking.
He released his grip from my arms, and I dropped them to my side. He broke slightly away from my now heaving chest, a hand reached up and brushed a strand of hair out of my face. I blushed. My knees went weak again.
“Let’s go to your room,” David suggested, and I nodded, taking his hand, and leading him down the hall. Before we got to the bedroom door, David pulled on my hand forcing me to stop before bumping into me. We both laughed.
He pushed me up against the wall again, he was firm, strong, in control but gentle. He put his face close to mine, he was breathing me in. I watched him, hearing only the sound of our breathing coming on heavier with each moment. I went to move my arms up to embrace him, but he took control again.
He took my hands in his own, and held them down at my side. He pushed his hard and warm body up against mine again, up against my breasts. He groaned. His mouth found that delicious spot on my neck, and began kissing me, my head fell languidly to the side, inviting him in for me.
He eased a leg in between the two of mine, and slowly brought his knee to up meet my crotch. He pressed against me, more firmly than before, his teeth now finding my neck, his hands gripping me tight: I cried out in pure ecstasy.
Where was this guy taking me? I’d never felt so much fire, so much passion. His obvious persistent need for me, fuelled my ravishing need for him. I wanted him now, needed him now, had to have him, but he was going to make me wait. His slow, delightful and delicate seduction was turning my tummy over and my world upside down. The waiting was turning my limbs to jelly and my mind to custard: what a sweet, sweet dessert I would make for him tonight.
He moved his mouth from my neck as he planted little kisses on my cheek, my nose, one eyelid, and then the other, before he found my mouth. But he teased: he placed his lips over the top of mine and breathed into me, he didn’t kiss me. I tried to kiss him, but he withdrew - he was a master, perhaps the master. I had to play his game, he was only going to give as much of himself to me as he wanted, so we were playing by his rules. I was happy to do that, so long as his game increased in pace soon. I had a fever burning between my legs and a fire inside my chest. I needed him, and I needed release.
He played with my lips, running his tongue slowly over them. First over the bottom, and then across the top. I closed my eyes so I could concentrate only on his feel, his smell, his sweet breath, his beating heart. Suddenly he kissed me full on my open mouth. I wasn’t expecting it - and that’s the precise moment he was waiting for. He wanted to lull me into a false sense of security before shocking me onto another plateau. He succeeded.
While he kissed me again with those warm tender succulent lips, his knee pushed harder into my groin, massaging me with his touch. His grip tightened on my own hands, I squeezed back. I arched my back and pressed my breasts into him and tried to kiss him back - but he was still in control.
We kissed for what seemed an eternity. I became lost in him. He transported me to another universe where only we existed, and time ceased to. I’d never understood the phrase about ‘two becoming one’ until right then. There was no him and I, there was only ‘us’.
As if reading my mind, David suddenly broke away from me. He let go of me and collapsed back on the wall behind him. He was breathing heavy, his eyes sparkling, his arousal evident. I was sure I could hear his heart beating, almost see it popping out from his chest. He ran his hands through his hair as he looked at me, and smiled.
“This is intense” he finally said.
When I regained my breath enough to speak, I answered, “Yes, yes it is.” I laughed, stayed against my side of the wall.
“Are you okay?” I asked, suddenly becoming worried that he had just
changed his mind.
He smiled, and then laughed a little chuckle, “Oh yeah, I’m just great!” he
laughed again, “I just didn’t realise, I didn’t think, I …..” he stammered, shifted feet, ran his hands through his hair again.
He looked up at me, I realised he had deep alluring brown eyes, and I melted. “It’s just, I’ve never felt like this with anyone before, I mean, I‘ve never felt so, so……so free, so right, so damned hot!”
I laughed. “I know, it’s crazy isn’t it, I feel the same way!”
“You do?” he seemed surprised.
“Yeah!!!! Can’t you tell?”
He laughed. And stared at me again. I stared back. He kept staring and soon I began to feel embarrassed by his attention. He sensed it, and walked toward me.
“Come with me,” he motioned, took my hand, and entered my room.
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Comment by katyzzz
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Sounds exciting, though, doesn't it?
katyzzz
Comment by Lilla
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*fanning myself*
This was a surprise read!
That is some kiss, not to mention the writing degree you are doing. I'd say that with this calibre of skill, your dreams of world recognition are imminent indeed *lol* the scenes are so vivid and tantilising ..
Wonderfully crafted. I loved the twist in the middle ... nice style... well spaced and pleasant to read .. I find large chunks of text with no spaces between paragraphs really off putting, too.
I don't often read erotica, because I completely loose concentration on other things *chuckle* but this has to be some of the best I have read, and I wish you every success in becoming a published author in this field.
Going now to try and re-focus on the day ... *chuckle*
Lilla ...
Comment by Kerryn Wood
DEBATABLE CONVERSATIONS...
Thanks...i think...lol...I'm not sure if you're saying that my peice was straight out of a movie, or it would be good to go as a movie?? LOL....please claify for me.....
thanks..and oooohhh yes, exciting it does sound...but now you have to go and read part one...and then part two again....and of course part three is coming......
thanks for your comment!!
Kerryn
Comment by Kerryn Wood
DEBATABLE CONVERSATIONS...
LOL.....i know i know....i often have to step away from the computer while writing these things, get a drink of milk, and splash my face with cold water......a girl can only handle so much!!
HOwever, I must thank you SO much for your wonderful comment and feedback - I am excited to know that I have 'touched' (no pun intended...lol) someone who doesn't, as you say, normally read erotica. I've been trying to write from a woman's point of view, to and for women, and wondered if I had started to succeed - I think you've answered my query....thank you thank you!!
Right....so who know's a publisher or film director????
(ps - have you read part one yet???? ...and part three is in the works...)
Kerryn
Comment by David
Just excuse me for a moment (I'll send you another PM later to let you know why I've posted this comment. You'll understand)
katyzzz ....
Are you serious? .. Commenting on a post like this?
When you're so anti-profanity of any kind?
You have got to be kidding me, surely? You approve of this?
And tell me? And all of Orble? How did you happen upon this post in the first instance?
Yet not comment on Part 1 of this story? ...
Give me a a break.
How about giving all of us a break?
David ...
Comment by Lilla
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Yes I onlt voted on part one... but it's where I learned of the twist. However, I might linger a bit here with the kissing bit (and take a breath) before plunging into part three (pardon the pun)...gosh I'm still *fanning furiously,* but i'm glad you are writing it, and I hope others read it and comment too...
Cheers
Lilla ...
Comment by Kerryn Wood
DEBATABLE CONVERSATIONS...
thanks again Lilla - oh, and part 3 is actually mild, there is NO sex in it whatsover!!! .....a bit more heavy handed kissing though...
Kerryn
Comment by Lilla
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I'll give the smutty stuff a miss, but heartily look forward to Part III of this piece.
Lilla ...