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Dance With Me

July 1st 2008 18:25
Dance With Me

You laid your own axe to the forest of my dreams

but beyond where I tangled in the undergrowth

of your former years

beyond the polished floorboards of

your dance studio

beyond your bare window

the woods are flourishing

alive with growth

But the way you dance?

I’d forego a bed of leaves

to dance with You

on a barren beach

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Comment by Kleonaptra

July 1st 2008 20:19
Oh David....

Masterful and beautiful....Darkness that drips shards of light.

BTW, somethings been bugging me from one of your other posts....A spank is very different to a slap.

*hugs* Love X

Comment by Damo

July 1st 2008 21:44
Actually I was born with two left feet.

However my wife teaches dance so I have learned to fake it.



Comment by Tracy

July 1st 2008 21:51
Have you ever seen me dance? I think you'd be better off in your bed of leaves.

Good to see you, Potter.

Comment by Lady Henrietta Muddling

July 2nd 2008 00:07
Kleo? ...

This?:

Darkness that drips shards of light.

makes everything I wrote look quite ordinary ... (Not that I mind ... the whole point of engaging with other writers is ... um ... to have wild animal sex with them ... Are you still with K-Man? lol

Just to fill you in? The poem was written for a woman on an adult sex site who dances semi naked on cam okay? ...

No, I haven't lost the plot. I never knew the story in the first place to lose the plot ...

I hope you're looking after that body of yours (just in case one day you do end up desperate and dateless ...

I'd better go ...

*wild animal sexual exploits* Lust xxx

Comment by Kleonaptra

July 2nd 2008 20:24
Darling...
Your writing is never ordinary.

I am with the Kman. Its hilarious. We've been trying to break up for 7 years. Must be Gods plan.

Eh....Im getting fat. office jobs will do that to you, but Im not going to let it happen.

No, I haven't lost the plot. I never knew the story in the first place to lose the plot ...

Then let me whisper it to you.

Wild asked about you yesterday. Did I tell you Wendi Faery is flitting about?

Comment by Lady Henrietta Muddling

July 2nd 2008 22:21
Damo,

Perhaps you and your wife could do the sequel to 'My Left Foot'. A musical. My Two Left Feet?



Comment by Lady Henrietta Muddling

July 2nd 2008 22:31
Tracy,

I haven't had the pleasure of seeing you dance.

It might be best if we just had a drink by the sound of it.

Besides, I only dance naked on cam in my room. Not in public.

Comment by Lady Henrietta Muddling

July 2nd 2008 23:23
Kleo,

Your relationship with Kman sounds like a good marriage to me.

As for office jobs making you fat? I'm thinking of fattening myself up. I'm a bit over brain-dead manual labouring jobs. And could do with a good feed.

I had a bit of email contact with Wild a month or so back. Last I heard, she'd broken up with the man she was in love with, and wasn't going to rest until they got back together. So I'm not expecting to hear from her in the next few years.

I didn't know Wendi was flitting about. I'm hardly ever on here. I'm only here atm cos I'm between jobs.

Comment by Kleonaptra

July 3rd 2008 20:08
Wild and I havnt had a chance to talk boys, always work talk.

Hehehe....It does sound like a marriage doesnt it? Hes so well trained now he can feed the horses without me!

Wendi is at -

Really Long Link



Comment by Tracy

July 3rd 2008 21:45
Even though I'm uncoordinated, I can dance and drink at the same time...maybe not effectively, but I'm happy...

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