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MR Life - by Max Ride

Chapter 2

December 9th 2006 00:01
MAX"S POV

Ari growled at and lunged at me. I quickly dogged out of the way. He was getting faster. Not a good thing. I heard Nudge giggling. What could be so funny? I cast glance behind me just in time to see Angel make an eraser dance. Great, at least they are having fun. I focused a kick to Ari's ribs. With a sickening crack I smiled. One little rib went to the market.... Just then Ari punched me in the face. NOTE TO SELF: Pay attention to giant hairy dude who is about to try to kill you.
MAX, FANG.
The advantage have having a voice inside of my head. I looked over at Fang. He had just gotten hit in the nose. That had to hurt. I half ran, half flew to him. I grabbed a chumk of their hair and wheeled her around. When my fist collided withe her muzzle she gave out a satisfying yelp. Kiscking eraser butt was actually fun. I mean, once you get past the whole I want to kill you thing. My joy was short-loved when Ari landed a side-kick to my back. I got back up. Furious I lunged at him.

" Really Ari, going for cheap shot s are we?" I couldn't hold in my anger any longer. Not that I would have. I snapped out a jab, hook, and finished with the perfect ax-kick to the top of his head.
" Max, we have to go," yelled Iggy. Angel, Gazzy, Iggy, Fang, and Nudge were already in the air.
" This isn't over," I hissed at Ari who lay sputtering on the floor. WIMP. I did an up and away.

Soon we were flying out over California.
" Max, can we go swimming?" Angel begged.
" Well, I guess." I was so gullible. But as soon as we landed I had a bad feeling about it.
( To Be Continued.)
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Comment by Jessicca

December 9th 2006 04:13
This is really an interesting story, although somehow I still can't figure out who these characters are... animals? human? something else?

I think I need to look at your chapter one first. Good work still.

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