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Chapter 10: Hey Jealousy

May 27th 2009 02:03
Chapter 10: Hey Jealousy


Dean drives towards Jack’s. Jen drives to the closest motel. When the girls get to the motel Jen tells the Desk clerk they need two rooms. She’s a little worried when she hands the desk clerk the fake ID and credit card Dean gave her but she tries not to show her nervousness.

The clerk says, “Thanks ladies. You will be in rooms 12 and 14. If you need anything, anything at all I’m floyd, I’ll help you out. If you need a ride to that Trapt concert I’m good for that to or a ride back here.

Jen says, “Thanks Floyd. We still need tickets for that show. Do you know anyone that can hook us up with 4 or maybe 5 tickets?”

Floyd says, “I would be happy to sell you tickets for the show. I’m just a multitasker around here. How many you need?”

Jen says, “Let me call a few peeps and we’ll be back in here in a few minutes.”

Jen and Candi go to one of the rooms. It’s a pretty musty motel but it will do for a night. Candi calls Abigail and all is fine with the kids. The girls talk to them a bit on the phone and their little boys just laugh. Then Jen calls Jack.

Jen says, “Hey Jack, its Jen. What are you doing tonight?”

Jack says, “I’m headed to the Trapt concert at the Agora in Cleveland. What are you doing tonight?”

Jen says, “I guess I’ll see you at the show. It’s going to be a fun night.”

Jack says, “It always was, is. I guess I’ll see you there, bye.”

Jack hangs up. Jen calls Sam. She is excited about knowing where Jack will be tonight so Sam and Dean don’t have to follow him. It doesn’t hurt she loves the band Trapt.

Jen says, “Hey Sam. I called Jack…”

Sam says, “What? Why? You didn’t have to call him. Dean and I have him covered.”

Jen says, “I know but I found out Trapt is playing at the Agora Theater. I can get us all tickets.”

Sam says, “So, how does that help us with the murders and why would you need to call him about that before me?”

Jen says, “He’s going to the show idiot.”

She hangs up on him. Candi looks at how pissed she has gotten over what Sam said. Jen turns away from her and heads to the restroom as her eyes turn black. To try to calm down she vents her frustrations to Candi through the door.

Jen says, “What a jealous ass he’s being. I’m trying to help find out if Jack is the murderer.”

Candi says, “Come on, lets go shopping. We need something new and hot for tonight. Sam will see you in your element and you will have to remind him there’s a murderer on the loose.”


Jen says, “Retail therapy that would be fun. We do need something new for tonight. Let’s go get those tickets from Floyd and hit the closest Mall.”

Jen comes out of the bathroom feeling a little better. They get four tickets then head to Chapel Hill Mall.

Dean and Sam are sitting in the Impala across from Jack’s house. Sam gets out of the car and starts walking towards the house when he gets off the phone with Jen. He knows now who Jack was on the phone with minutes before Jen called him. Jack looked way to happy to hear from her. Dean grabs Sam’s arm before he even gets across the street.

Dean says, “What are you doing? You can’t go kill the guy for knowing your girl is hot. She loves you man. Don’t blow it.”

Sam says, “Did you see what he was doing while talking to her? I could probably take him out from here through the window. He probably killed those women and he has some power over her. Dean, get back in the car.”

Dean says, “Ok, whatever. I’m tired of this dark Sam shit. Tell me when Sammy gets back because I miss my real brother.”

Sam starts toward the house again. Dean hits him from behind with a log off a fire pit pile. Sam falls. He hears Dean before passing out.

Dean says, “Did you actually think I’d let you kill a man that might be innocent.”

Dean knocks on Jack’s door. Jack answers.

Dean says, “Hey buddy. I’m Dean. We didn’t meet earlier. You want a ride with us to the show? The girls are meeting us there. Sam’s a little drunk already. He just passed out walking to your door.”

Jack says, "um no. I’ll drive myself. Who are you again?”

Dean says, “I’m good friends with Sam and Jen. And my wife is best friends with Jen so we are all like family. You sure you don’t want a ride?”

Jack says, “No thank you. I might see you at the show.”

Dean says, “Sure, I’ll buy the drinks tonight. You want to help me get Sam in the Impala. I just hope he wakes up in time for the show later.”

Jack says, “Sure, I’ll help. He is huge. What is he 6 foot 4 or something? How did they get together?”

Dean says, “Oh, it’s the whole opposites attract thing with them I guess. She’s all short and innocent and he’s well not.”

Laughing loudly Jack says, “Well she is short. She was the only person I knew that called me tall and I’m only 5ft 8in.”

They get Sam in the back seat of the Impala and Dean thanks Jack for his help. He calls Candi as he drives away.

Dean says, “What are you girls up to? Something bad I should know about?”

Laughing Candi says, “Of course were being bad. Are you boys playing nice with Jack? How bad is Sam flipping out?”

Dean says, “Oh, he was ready to kill Jack but I knocked that idea out of his head. You girls just meet us at the Agora in an hour.”

Candi says, “We will be ready to tease and please.”

Dean says, “Sounds like a promising night.”

Candi says, “I think Jen’s still mad at Sam but what she’s wearing tonight should help them patch things up. I hope Sam sees her before Jack does.”

Dean says, “I’ll make sure he does.”

Sam wakes up as Dean is parking the Impala at the Agora. The daylight is fading fast. The parking lot lights are coming on. Dean looks back at Sam.

Dean says, “Are you ok? That’s the only thing I could think of doing to stop you from making a big mistake.”

Sam says, “What the hell Dean? Where are we anyway?”

Dean says, “We’re at the Agora. The girls are waiting for us. Go makeup with Jen. I’ll take care of Jack.”

Sam says, “I don’t really think this case is one of ours. Maybe we should just leave in the morning.”

Dean says, “Yeah, I thought the same thing. Maybe we will leave tomorrow.”

They get out of the Impala and head to the entrance. Their girls are waiting dressed in tight skinny jeans, tank tops and black mini jackets. Jen’s tank top is hot pink and Candi’s is red.

Dean says, “You look hot babe. Don’t they look great Sam?”

Sam says, “Yeah, let’s go in.”

Jen says, “Fine, let’s just go in then.”

She crosses her arms, pivots and stomp off through the archway towards the music playing. Dean has his arm around Candi’s back. He tilts his head motioning Sam to go after Jen. Sam throws up his hands and shakes his head as if he has no idea what to do. He walks quickly to catch up with Jen. Dean and Candi walk in behind him.

Dean says. “They’ll be fine.”

Jen finally really hears the music. It sounds so familiar. She turns the corner. Jack is right there waiting. Sam stops in his tracks. With her arms still crossed she passes by Jack just nodding a hello to him. He follows her into the ballroom where a band is playing. Dean slaps Sam upside the head as him and Candi pass.

Sam says, “Ou, what was that for?”

Dean says, “Don’t just stand there; go in there after her.”

Sam says, “She doesn’t want me to…”

Candi says, “She does. Go get her stupid.”

Dean and Candi walk into the ballroom and Sam follows them. The band has stopped playing. They are packing up their equipment. Dean yells to Jack who Jen is trying to ignore. Jack thinks he knows why. She knows the band.

Dean says, “Hey Jack, how about getting those drinks at the bar before Trapt starts in the main theater?”

Jack says, “Yeah, alright, I could use a drink or two. Maybe I could use a shot of JD or two too.”

The guys from the band see Jen standing in front of the stage. The guitarist grins real big and looks at the singer. All expression fades from his face. He jumps off stage to talk to her. She starts to smile, but tries to contain herself as much as she can. Sam is standing beside her really not wanting to be there.

Mike says, “Hi, We haven’t seen you in awhile. How have you been?”

Jen says, “I’ve been good. How have you been? You sounded great.”

Mike says, “Thanks, we’re working on some new material. We plan to go back into the studio soon.”

Jen says, “This is my husband Sam. Isn’t he hot?”

She laughs as the guys size each other up and shake hands.

Jen says, “We have a one year old that’s just like his Daddy.”

Mike says, “That’s cool. I have to help them out, but I’ll maybe talk to you after.”

Jen says, “Cool.”

Mike gets back on stage to help the other guys pack things up and take it all out the side door. Sam looks at Jen with hurt in his eyes. She doesn’t look at him until after he speaks. (‘Talk show host’ by radiohead plays)

Sam says, “So, that’s Mike. He does have a great voice.”

Jen says, “Yeah, he does. He’s great at a lot of things. But Sam…”

Jen and Sam say, “I’m sorry.”

Sam says, “You don’t have to be sorry. I was being a jealous fool over nothing.”

Jen says, “I made you feel that way. I should have called you first.”

The ballroom is dark and empty except for some lights illuminating the stage. Smiling Jen takes Sam’s hand pulling him into a dark corner. He picks her up. She wraps herself around him as they kiss and makeup. Jen feels Sam’s warm breath on her neck. He wants more of the drug coursing through both their veins and she does too.

Jen says, “Just cut me a little with your pocket knife. It’s ok Sam.”

Sam says, “OK.”

Sam grabs his knife and cuts into her skin behind her ear. He drinks her in deeply.

Jen says, “Sam, I need some too. Stop, its my turn.”

Sam stops. He looks at her. Then he slits a gash in his own neck. He breaths heavily as she takes in as much as she can.

Jen says, “Let’s go to the car. But wipe your mouth before we go into the light.”

Sam wipes her blood from his mouth with the back of his hand. He licks it off his hand not wanting to waste a drop. He puts her down. As they walk out with their arms around each other Dean sees them. He raises his beer and smiles toward them. Sam sees him and nods. Dean nudges Candi to look.

Dean says, “I told you they’d be fine.”

Dean and Jack do two more shots. Candi has changed her drink to diet Pepsi thinking someone should keep a level head tonight. Jen and Sam walk back in as Trapt takes the stage. Dean, Candi and Jack join them as they walk though the crowd to the front right lower level balcony. (Headstrong by Trapt plays)

Dean says, “That’s your Song Sammy.”

Sam looks at him annoyed. Everyone laughs. Even Jen laughs but she stretches up to put her arms around him. He relaxes and smiles at her getting over Dean's comment quickly. He puts his arms around her. Candi leans on Dean. One of his arms is around her. He has a beer in the other hand. (Echo by Trapt plays)

Jen says, “This is my favorite Trapt song.”

Sam says, “I know. Close my eyes, Let the whole thing pass me by There is no time to waste asking why, I'll run away with you by my side…”

Sam bends down to kiss her. She kisses him first as they hold each other swaying to the music. Dean and Candi are holding each other too. Jack looks at Sam and Jen and flees the scene. Dean sees him going.

Dean says, “Candi, I’m going to follow him. Tell Sam after this song is over.”

Candi say, “Ok.”

The song ends. (Victim by Trapt plays)

Candi says, “Hey Sam, Jack left and Dean followed him.”

Before Sam can say anything Jen passes out. He catches her before she hits the floor. She comes to and whispers to him.

Jen says, “It’s not Jack. It’s Justin, the drummer. The one in Mike's band, but it’s not really him. Be careful, he knows Dean.”

Sam carries Jen out to the lobby. Candi sits on the bench seat beside her. Sam runs off to find Dean.

Candi says, “What happened? Are you ok?”

Jen says, “I just got dizzy. I guess it was making up in the car that took too much out of me.”

Candi says, “I’m just glad you two made up. I hope Sam finds Dean so we can go back to the motel. Maybe I’ll get mad at Dean for running off just so we can make up tonight.”

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