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Can I Have You to Hold (Part I)

October 30th 2007 09:27
I want you to hold.
All of those times, I never said a word.
Now, I only want you for the days of old.

It's a long moment when I think of you.
Time has doomed all my expectations.
Yet, I still want you to hold.

Has the space between us grown cold?

Sometimes I feel like a new day,
shiny and new,
full of energy and time abundant,
until I see the clock.
Time moves me to see that your feet are actually made of clay.

The stakes are high and I'm forced to fold.
Yet, I still want you to hold.

Can we meet at the place where there is no time?

Just you and me,
me and you,
Tell me your story and I'll tell you mine.
I ask only one favor -
Can I have you to hold?

Is she still your favorite flavor?
Does she still make you feel fine?
Best of all,
Does she still say "I want you to hold?"

So this is reality and I'm gone.
So why do I still want you to hold?

Do you think of me when she makes you tired?
When you close your eyes, do you still see my face?
When you dream, is it of she, or me?

How does it feel to be in your place?
Do you feel like your love is on hold?
When fate deems it true, and I see you...

Will you say, "Can I have you to hold?"
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Comment by Kleonaptra

November 3rd 2007 09:15
So haunting this one.....Like echoes of pain.

Comment by Patricia Graff

December 4th 2007 19:26
Oh, thank you, Kleo! This is an old one (all but three of my writings I've posted on here are). There are still two other parts to this poem that I have to post - hence the "Part I." I hope to add them in the next few days...


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