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The Sands - Part 4

October 30th 2007 09:45
The split second that Sally’s eyes spent in his direction Steve would swear they didn’t see him. Nervously he watched as her shoulder length hair shuttered back into place, the chance to see her colours lost. What now he asked himself as embarrassment washed over him for the third time in the space of a few minutes.

Arguing a case against existence in this time itself, one simple look had opened a hole in his foot that was in danger of swallowing him whole. The confrontation of truth was sobering, why would an attractive girl discuss issues of emotion with a complete stranger.


The initial premise of Steve’s introduction was one of hopeful mutual attraction, he had made little effort to disguise his intentions, how then could he expect her to be receptive to sincerity or concern. He felt like seeking out a rip and allowing it to suck him from the beach before the world could be damaged further.

Instead of the world ending in a flash of lightning and a thunderous crash, a soft yet determined voice reached into his ears, the words perfectly interpreted and yet so gently spoken, he had to check to be sure they had come from her. Assured that they were indeed alone he replied ‘Yes the night is beautiful, almost perfect’

And so the conversation began, Sally asked why he had said ‘almost’ and Steve explained perfection could only be, if it were shared. She seemed to understand despite his vague words, asked who he would like to be sharing this moment in time with; for once in his life Steve had difficulty providing an answer.

The DJ raised the tempo in the aging club tent they had escaped, the evening was still young and the beach looked enticing. ‘ Would you like to walk a little way?’ Steve asked with hope in his heart, Sally looked back longingly at the noise before turning to him for a second time. Judging by her smile Steve felt he had been assessed as worth the risk, for now at least.


They walked slowly, the soft sand making progress difficult even in bare feet. Their rhythm slowed until they were in tune, the occasional slip, an awkward attempt to assist without touching.

Sally’s outfit was simple and yet revealing, the skirt fluttered around her knees, a sleeveless top formed a second skin across her delicate breasts. Steve knew his clumsy hands could not be trusted in a simple encounter with any part of her body. A wild imagination enhanced by beer would transform the slightest brush stroke into a major work of art.

At a point in view of the crowd but away from the noise the conversation stopped them again, having steered away from his own personal imaginings, he tried to revisit her display of emotion before they met. His motives were genuine, had she just argued with a partner or lost something precious, it would be totally inappropriate to pursue the pathway of lust so vividly imagined. Instead the simple pleasure of her company would suffice. Despite the wickedly naughty pictures that float continuously within, his Steve was more than capable of playing the consummate gentleman.

Sally’s expression was disheartening he felt the worst fears were to be realised until she said ‘you will think I’m really silly but its all of this’ her hands encompassing the beach, water and party ‘this reminds me so much of home, a place I haven’t been for so long’
‘Do you miss home ?’ Steve asked with hesitation, instinctively knowing more was to come
‘So much and yet I don’t want to go back just yet’
‘You are due to head home ?’
‘Yes Friday week’ her words tremble slightly as she turned to face the sea

He allows her time to recover, knowing exactly how volatile a mixture of emotions can be. The trip can be traumatic and yet exhilarating at the same time, fluctuating between a state of elation to desperate sadness and yet not knowing which emotion is truly justified.

Eventually Sally turned clearing her tears with already wet fingers ‘I’m sorry you shouldn’t spoil your evening, go back to your friends, I will be fine’
Shocked at the suggestion that any half decent bloke could leave a beautiful young lady in such a state Steve expressed his gratitude for her consideration of his welfare. ‘Of course you will be fine but hey my friends are all busy mating, I’d just be going back to my dull room. Unless of course you want me to leave you alone ?’ he paused for effect ‘I’d be delighted to hear more about home.’

Sally giggled at his formal cheekiness and they shared a smile, their eyes locked for a few seconds he hoped desperately that she had judged him correctly. She looked away to the horizon still in the process of deciding which road to follow, after a long pause she turned and looked directly into his eyes for too long and smiled.
‘You want to sit’ he asked deliberating extending the potential for time together.
‘Look the sun is not far off the horizon, we should witness the end of the day’ With that she grasped the hem of her skirt and lowered herself to the sand gracefully.
Watching her closely he was rewarded by a flash of white undies, only the slightest glimpse but enough. He felt slightly guilty for admiring her breasts, wrapped as they were in a thin layer of blue, the basis of support not obvious, but two slight peaks in the material reassured him that he wasn’t alone in his thoughts.

Joining her on the sand, Steve lies on his tummy rather than sits. His height makes it awkward and besides lying next to a female, even a fully dressed one, is very stimulating. As she silently gazes towards the horizon watching the burnt orange orb slipping slowly towards the sea, he wonders what thoughts are in her mind. Is this excessively romantic situation affecting her in the same way or is she too distracted by her impending departure.

The silence between them grows, the potential for disaster real, he searches for the words to take charge and move forward.
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The Sands - Part 3

October 26th 2007 04:11
As summer venues go The Sandcastle is pretty special, supposedly only open when the heat is rising the bar serves everything a beach bum might expect, cold beer for the regulars, foreign wine by any measure and of course a full selection of cocktails to weaken the sturdiest of knees.

By far the best seller though was the free bottled water, a huge draw card for locals where the tapped variety was best viewed being poured into a bottomless glass - literally. Had this not been modern Cuba, where life had exceeded the limitations of money years before, management might need to review its policy of free entry before sunrise.

The dance floor was huge but never far from the DJ, the ancient speakers designed for a previous decade of style still translated a transcendental beat well enough. The ambience was serenity itself, how could it be anything less perched on the shore of a crystal blue lagoon with a perfect sunset guaranteed every night.

People got lost every night, somewhere between the compressed sand floor and the angry blue polka dot sky. Not altogether by accident, many came for that very reason but no-one really knew just how lost they might get.
In years gone by, the more or less educated depending on your viewpoint might suppose witchcraft was involved, evil demons or religious savors to blame, today we know its just part of the human condition.

All sorts come to release their souls in the invisible mists of the music, take the freedom on offer to drift alone leaving their troubles at the door. In time their souls and bodies will meet and fall in love again, a fresh fire burning within with a reprogrammed spirit.

Sally escaped the hungry hands of the dance floor, the third night in a row and she was now starting to appreciate this was no ordinary dance club. Anyone watching her path couldn't help but be confused, angling deliberately towards the bar, fighting through the resident bodies, skirting a couple of layers across the face of the bar. Eventually, reaching the far side of the club less than a handful of yards from where she had danced, she squeezed out onto the private beach and drifted to the water’s edge.

Of course this had been no more than an elaborate plan, there was reason behind this elusive course, her unsuspecting prey had been tempted she knew. She'd felt his body stir even without seeing it happen, it would be less than a minute before he too escaped the crowd; she dusted her cheeks and eyelids with a wet thumb, presented herself to the lowering sun above the horizon and waited.



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The Sands - Part 2

October 24th 2007 08:01
The dance floor was packed. Petite shoulders rubbed against muscular arms, silky dresses slid seductively against simple cotton blouses. Strangers touched intimately without ever meeting. This was a den of vultures and vixens alike, pouncing before a neighbour stole it’s prey.

Thrill upon thrill electrocuted the crowd, exciting them higher and higher. The beat marched mercilessly on, oblivious to the physical needs of the brethren. Outside the throng, onlookers rested before re-entering the feeding ground, water bottles littering the sandy floor; discarded and flattened from the human machine.

Hands felt every part of her body, her skirt soiled with the sweat of more than one. Her legs felt fingers stray deliberately to every part of her, initially she’d rebelled but now her mind succumbed to the orders of the music. Sally was enjoying the abandonment of conventional order, her mind had closed to the outside world and now all that was feeding her was the DJ’s charm.

Three hands were unusual but strangely exciting, particularly when they came from different owners. The first was hesitant and chubby, the back of his fingers moved up and down her right hip, his back was to her but she could tell he was short and hairy. The hem of her skirt edged higher as they bounced gently out of rhythm.

Unable to move away, Sally adjusted to match his movements stopping the upward momentum of her skirt. Misunderstanding her intentions, his hand, now stationary on her thigh flipped, his palm and fingers now clasping her upper thigh; his thumb strangely absent she imagined it floating perilously close to her preciousness.

Acting swiftly her nails removed three clean strips of skin from the back of his hairy hand, there was no noise, no commotion, just a momentary empty space filled instantaneously by another. The second hand was soft, with thin deliberate fingers, it touched her stomach from behind as gently as a mother. The power within the fingertips clearly displayed as it massaged below her breasts around her belly button.

The third was overt; squeezing her bottom she could feel his desire attentive to the edge of her underwear. It was nice and smooth, deliciously enticing. She could feel the lace being worked slowly and surely back and forth across the very centre of her body. Streaks of excitement shooting up her spine, mixing with the warmth from her tummy, the initial bubbles of euphoria growing into pure pleasure; she knew she had to cork this bottle before the night was ruined.

The courtesy and sensitivity the third hand displayed deserved more than the pain inflicted on the first, taking the hand in hers she raised it to her lips, starting with his thumb she sucked each finger clean. Reaching the wedding band she looked longingly into his eyes, still in time to the music and closed his door forever.

The girl wanted more, having witnessed the departure of other the two intruders the girl sensed her time was nigh. From behind Sally felt the second hand arrive to meet the first, imprisoned by two delicate arms she felt the unmistakable impression of a female body squeeze into her bottom. Lips attached to her neck as one hand started to explore her breasts.

Taking advantage of the security and warmth for a few seconds she questioned whether indeed she wanted it to stop. Another time and place she would have led the way but tonight was different, tonight had another purpose, tonight could be so much more.

Sally turned within the arms of this beautiful strange girl and kissed her soft juicy red lips as deeply and as passionately as she had ever kissed a girl before. Holding the girl’s face with her hands slowly their lips parted, she breathed gently into her mouth all the time keeping a watch on her glorious blue eyes. The music played on but they had stopped moving, she whispered an apology, turned and was gone before the girl realised what she had lost.

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The Sands - Part 1

October 24th 2007 07:58
The first time her short white fluffy dress whisked across Steve’s eyeline his mouth forgot the words it was attempting to form. Her feet moved quickly as though they were on a deadline, the crowds parted to allow passage and then silently consumed every trace.

Despite the split second encounter, he knew he'd regret not seeing her face. A cloud had passed over his sun, unless he rectified it immediately the chill would surely seep into his night


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October 24th 2007 03:12
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