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Arses and Elbows - humourarse

Another Poem, this time with feeling(genuine)

July 16th 2007 00:53

In my prime,
I made it rhyme,
In my deathbed? Lime.

My love
You were a dove
Over the cliff? I did shove.

With my shovel I sent
My tears knew no relent
Because I have this condition where my tear ducts don't know when to stop producing tears. It's quite a serious medical issue that requires constant care on my part.



On my part...
You put your part
My hair lost its part

Love, tears: strings?
Pulled?
Share my - things.

Lovey dovey.
End applause.

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Comment by Morgan Bell

October 30th 2008 17:28
i love the randomly long explanation line in this poem . . . you have a similar sense of humour to one of my very good friends . . . he says "diabolical" alot, and thats how i think of you - completely diabolical!

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