A celebration of rain
Something exciting was happening
…way down below…
all the tiny creatures gathered
…huddling…
…watching…
their excited whispers
rumbled through the hills
…people were smiling…
passing their gleaming grin
from one to another
their flame of hope passed
like candlelight.
The sight of the clouds
reignited joy in their hearts
the first drops fell
…slowly…
like fairy dust
…drifting…
on the breeze
sparkling jewels
collecting on spiky
forgotten trees
the caress of the earth’s breath
on naked
…exposed skin…
…a thousand orgasmic shivers…
as kisses rain down from the heavens
droplets cold
to the touch
igniting fires
…in all the right places…
palm trees ripple
in the wind
long fingers running
like a fervent piano players
...touching...
moans of pleasure
at each stroke
…seductive windy songs…
…lick at lusty ears…
the waves of water
come and go
until all the drops are spent
…resting…
…exhausted…
on the heaving
surface of the earth.
…way down below…
all the tiny creatures gathered
…huddling…
…watching…
their excited whispers
rumbled through the hills
…people were smiling…
passing their gleaming grin
from one to another
their flame of hope passed
like candlelight.
The sight of the clouds
reignited joy in their hearts
the first drops fell
…slowly…
like fairy dust
…drifting…
on the breeze
sparkling jewels
collecting on spiky
forgotten trees
the caress of the earth’s breath
on naked
…exposed skin…
…a thousand orgasmic shivers…
as kisses rain down from the heavens
droplets cold
to the touch
igniting fires
…in all the right places…
palm trees ripple
in the wind
long fingers running
like a fervent piano players
...touching...
moans of pleasure
at each stroke
…seductive windy songs…
…lick at lusty ears…
the waves of water
come and go
until all the drops are spent
…resting…
…exhausted…
on the heaving
surface of the earth.
absolutely breathtaking! Beautiful prose! My god, how moving and emotional!
A masterpiece!
Well done!
Take care,
Nick
Photography Tips
MS Paint Art
Songs of praise for the rain and your poetic craft, after Nick, what can I say?
katyzzz
Histeries, Mysteries and what not
Lifes little slices
Mystical Creativity
Great peice!!!! such passion!!! soo erotic!!!
Tammy
Movies and Life
Ars Poetica
cigarette? somehow i think not..
seriously Ash, i loved this, the feeling of being sated by long awaited rain, is tangible through your words; especially loved ~
sparkling jewels
collecting on spiky
forgotten trees
just kinda speaks to me ...
lovenhugs chicka,
~Lily
Celebrity Obsession
What a gorgeous piece of writing. I love rain. Now you've given me another reason to like it even more!
Kylie
Kalikapsychosis
I was blown away! This is GORGEOUS!!!!
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
Many thanks! There has been so much rain around recently I felt inspired by it`s beauty.
Thanks
Ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
yep... always a pen near at hand! can`t live without them... well actually I`m more into pencils.... but hey!
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
oh i`m sooooooo sorry ~ laughing~ I read your post about how much you missed Charlie... I hope that he has come home by now..... oh if I ever find love like yours one day I will just melt into a big puddle....
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
~laughing~
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
cigarette? somehow i think not..
~cracking up~
the clouds have been building and disappearing and so much talk has been going on about rain.... I couldn`t resist.... I LOVE THE RAIN....
thanks for visiting Lily... I always love your visits....
hugs ta ya
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
I also love the rain.... ahhhhhhh it`s glorious... and since we have had a few showers recently I just couldn`t resist....
you gotta love it!
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
WOW those winds were a little more gusty than they appeared... I hope you manage to find your way back again ~harharhar~
thanks K - always appreciated
ash
Anthroblogogy
Killer Beats
Ramble On
Hipnotherapy
palm trees ripple
in the wind
long fingers running
like a fervent piano players
...touching...
moans of pleasure
at each stroke
…seductive windy songs…
…lick at lusty ears…
the waves of water
come and go
until all the drops are spent
…resting…
…exhausted…
on the heaving
surface of the earth.
Ash
Being a sex therapist I can completely use this during session.... So beautiful...so sensual....so well crafted. Thanks so much
Mis
Histeries, Mysteries and what not
Lifes little slices
Mystical Creativity
Tammy
From The Home Front
Enviro Warrior
Dream Herald
Esoteric Bookshop
I felt every drop ... on especially parched skin... beautiful, poignant, and memorable.
I LOVED IT ... and the rain too... I stood in it for an hour...Soooo invogorating...like your wonderful words.
I love the photo you've used I had to look twice to see it was earth now and not some recreation of a premordial time, long ago.
Lilla ...
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
Yep we had some GREAT rain it was lovely... came bucketing down.. I`m hoping it`s going to carry on. I was listening to the weather guy the other night (John Schluter I think his name is) and he was saying something about we are at the end of the El Nino cycle and according to research it shows that at the end of it they have really good rainfall... but in the Southern States. There was loads of articles in today`s paper about rain and climate change.... seems people are slowly starting to wake up to the idea...
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
WHat a great compliment - thank you! So happy to be of service... every time I see the fingers of the palm trees going in the wind it reminds me of a piano players fingers in full speed across the keys...
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
~giggles~ you make me smile
ash
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
oh I sooooo love standing in the rain... it`s cleansing isn`t it?? Literally too ~snort~ .... and kisses in the rain... siiiggghhh ... it`s all so romantic....
Ah this photo... I tell you it was the weirdest experience... I shall write about it over on Traveller... I see what you mean about it now... it kinda looks surreal huh!
be good
ash
From The Home Front
Enviro Warrior
Dream Herald
Esoteric Bookshop
how I can I be good when you talk about kissses in the rain?
Ooh I can feel a poem coming on .... *giggle*
Lilla ...
Australian Traveller
Flashes of memories
coolgirlsar to the rescue
One Too Many Chocolate Bars
I must admit I am a bit fed up with the rain but hey I live in England and so it's a constant for us but after reading this and seeing that (even though it's glorious sunshine at the moment) we are due rain later today I have the urge to go and stand outside with hubby.
Take Care.
Sarah. xxx